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[BigRich16 Tribute]

Um ... OK

Well ok this was a tad odd it seems to be a "LOOP" of a very very short flash no animation at all on this one at all just some images changing around so there can be some work put in here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here with this one it lacked some visuals and more animation so you can add more of that to give it more of a fuller flash feel. So this one seems to have a Repeating Loop and while that may be amusing it tends to just be anoying but you can fix that by adding a Stop Action Code in the flash script, just something to think about. anyways good luck on your flash journey.

~X~

[Guns of the Awesome]

Funny stuff

So first off let me start by saying its a pleasure to see stuff like this, given that its not perfect and is not the worst either But it was Cleverly done, And there are some areas that can be worked on for improvment but. Lol well this was funny and amusing flash. it takes me back to playing those games back in the day, but as for this film it was good art design, nice voices and overall fun humor. With all that said you cando alot more with this I have made a few suggestions and I do hope they help to improve on this, now dont get me wrong you have something decent here and the effort shows but could still use a few more additions of stuff and so on, so go ahaead and give some new ideas a try. And hope to see some of those changes in the future or even on something new you may be working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so this one kind of reminds me of a birthday party you can never be too sure of things, so you need to prepare, Just like in flash checking everything is a must and here are a few things that could be checked out. Hmm hard to improve on something that is very good, but if anything add more funny moments maybe even have a "BEHIND-THE-SCENES" section or even "BLOOPERS" anyways nice work.

~X~

[GunChest Episode 06_02]

Nice work

You really do have something going on here these are like a huge movie and you fill it with detail and such, I like the options you give these like the "LANGUAGE" options, great visuals and this can really lock you in.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Again I would think that a larger view screen would be a plus here, maybe even short up these epsiodes since they are pretty long.

~X~

[GunChest Episode 05_02]

Very impressive

What can I say about this, its an ok submission, has its ups and downs, Some stuff can be Utilised better with content and such, But this entry certainly Has some good potential about it and can go even furtjer then it already is, and i do look forward to more of this, but anyways now for more details into this entry. Well you have outdone yourself on this one and have impressed this reviewer, I even like the added "SUBTITLES" there was some really nice visuals here, very well done work. After seeing and messing with this one I thought it was great, its a decent flash there is room for improvment, and you should think about adding some new stuff as mentioned below and even in the above review lines, it will be great for all, anyways keep up the work I like the effort you put in sofar, and look forward to seeing more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I believe there are various little issues here or there that can be cleaned up, certainly there may be ways for ideas old and new to be Utilised somehow Not much is Required on yourpart either but lets look into a few things here. You did well on the flash overall I would only suggest maybe a lerger "VIEW-SCREEN" anyways untill next time.

~X~

[Chris & Harry]

Nice work here

so from the get-go I really thought this was good, and I was unexpectedly taken back with how good it really was, so that for sure shows your effort and time put into this, There are various ideas and tips you could go about and make this even better, I would love to see that happen, Now Criticisms aside Its a decent flash entry shows your skills and effort. A good action flick you have here you even added some randomness to it and then with the good music it really pushed this into the next level, so nice job. Great flash here, I really like what you did here and the Effort does show, there was a few things that could be made better and some extra effort on your part would, theres.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I may have a few pointers on this production here discussing how one can Apply possible new ideas, not expecting a full Makeover or anything but lets see what we come up with. Add more "EFFECTS" especially with all the fight scenes that would be a big plus.

~X~

[Dog Of Man]

Interesting

A good flash here I thought, its interesting how this starts off, pretty interesting, and i got some good entertainment value from this, I really like how this cameout from start to finish. Keep with the creativity and making things unique, like you have done here. This was a very positive flash, with afew tweaks it can be even better. I like this black and white touch with this one and this one had a dark feel to it and with the strange idea here it really came to an interesting piece very nice job here this one will go on my faves list. And with this flash it was actually pretty good, I liked the effort you put forward on this but there are still a few more things here and there that could make it even better, ihave posted a few ideas i hope they help to improve on this so good luck, and I hope to see improvments soon, or in the near future. But untill then this was a decent piece of flashworks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So even as Advised by others you have an Envision about this flash maybe we can Visualize that same concept and Include some helpful Factors that will make this look and feel smoother. I would say add more of that color in there and give it its own touch.

~X~

[Flecko's Halloween]

cool

So as I sit here and get ready to write this review, I am already decided that you have put some decent effort and you gave some good Focus to alot of this and in trying to make it really good, inwich I think you have acomplished. so from start to finish I was amused and entertained, keep up the good effort and good style. You did put a scary mode and feel into this as soon as the opening scene starts up nice visuals and overall really came together, the vices are pretty good but there is some "STATIC" when you get some high pitched voices. You have an idea here and something decent here, I had fun with this one but it could use some more effort as suggested below and above and hope those ideas help to make it even better for all, but even as it is it was pretty decent if you ask me, keep up the decent efforts though. And hope to see more of your flash-works sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok here is some insight on a few positive ideas and some things I saw that could be looked into, So lets really jump start this flash with some new and old ideas, That can make for some positive changes. there was some static on high pitched sounds so maybe some sound quality work.

~X~

FleckoGold responds:

I figured as much about the sound, when I listened to it later on. I agree. I've thought about putting more hours into audio practices, I could probably get good at it, but as it stands, now, I'm mainly "visually oriented", creatively.

Thanks for the info. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've kept at it since this cartoon's release. I feel I've made a lot of headway in my style, and I'm looking forward to releasing a new cartoon as soon as I can get that remaining time into it.

Thanks!

[The happy bunnybun dance]

Notbad

lol well this was notbad it was kind of amusing but it was entertaining, I thought you could have added more content and whatnot, maybe even some details in the bunny like characters or other types of shades and whatnot.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained above some more shades in characters, and some more content.

~X~

[The Murderer]

Amazing

Well so its not all the time you see flash works like this especially in a movie form so i was actually suprised with how you presented this and how you let it flow from start to the end, So in that aspect of things it actually does get off to a decent start. Very good "AUDIO" pn this one and the animation was brilliant, as you move from one scene to the next it gets even better, Really nice Concept infact at times there was some surprising elements that made this that much better, so now we can see you are capable of bringing fourth some interesting and unique ideas full of life and beyond.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
In this little area of the review you can try some new ideas or even some old tricks of the past, but regardless lets try and improve on a few things and make this even better. Now here is one of those flash types that could do well from some subtitles now dont get me wrong this does not need subtitles but it would be something extra and nice for the viewer. So maybe adding some subtitles would be a big plus here.

~X~