XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[pigeonmaster88's B-Day!!]

Enetrtaining

Lol well I must admit this was pretty entertaining, and you found a good song to go with some simple animation and it seems to have worked well here, allthough the art designs here could be more refined and what not, but regardless it was amusing, so notbad work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well the art designs here could be more refined bring in more art designs on the backrounds and such.

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[How Not to Time Travel.]

Lol funny

This was very funny and the voices was pretty good sure was a lot of voicing but seems like it was all worth it, the animation and visuals were simple yet kind of neat also like the back to the future theme song ish,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The best thing you can do here is add some subtitles, im not really saying anything is wrong with the voices but sometimes it can be, so adding some subtitles wouldnt hurt, and besides it would be a nice little option for viewers and such, and you can even go farther and have a toggle option for people who chose to have it on or off. anyways good flash.

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[Shakukudance]

hmmm ok

Well not so sure this was much of a story or anything going on besides some animated images and such but I guess this was clock day, it was amusing to the least, so anyways interesting flash you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation, more content, more story would really push this up a tad.

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[Smash Kingdom Lost Levels]

Kind of random

The animation is nice but not awesome, Doesnt mean it cant be awsome its actually decent work and is in a pretty goos shape of quality, B utit still needs some Tweaking there and here and all around for some better outcomes It does have some interesting and entertaining things. all about it though and thats what drew me to this. Haha this was actually pretty cute, and I really like the random including all the different characters from old games and whatnot that made for some good viewing. You really did outdo yourself on this one, the effort does show, and you cant ask for any more then that, So keep up with these unique types, and keep making stuff, as long as theres something to create then keep on making them, You have something good here and as long as you can keep the Momentum going it will be worthwhile to the fullest.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its always good to experiment with ideas here and there even when overused and there is ofcourse always Plenty of room to Include a few helpful ideas that can make a flash like this much better. You have outdone yourself here I dont think you should touch it but if anything is suggested I would suggest some extra larger "VIEW-SCREEN" but other then that its pretty solid.

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[Girlchan in Paradise Ep1]

This was amusing

There are various words I could say about this flash entry, but I think what comes to mind Mostly is that it brings some good enjoyment and has alot of entertainment value, Now I wont say its perfect by any means but I did find it to be a pretty decent and fun movie and i would recremend this to most people who enjoy this kind of stuff. This was interesting and funny at the same time, but it was amusing on the eyes and the ending was notbad at all, a funny flash all around, maybe use some subtitles. You have a decent Showcase here a Definite one to checkout again, you Produce it and the Overall results are a positive one Devoted fans aswell, so nice job all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can do a lot with simple ideas and your film would be better off for it, Infact you can get a lot of impact from the most simple of ideas so try some things out here. subtitles are always nice to have, even if it is not hard to understand its always a nice option to have, now its even better when you cant understand whats being said, then the subtitles come in very handy.

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[PMP Blog 3]

lol

Ok so those voices are just different, gets really high pitched and scratches on the mic, but regardless it was a good design of characters, the convo's between these characters and the audiance was a nice concept, I wouldnt mind seeing some subtitles, but it was a decent flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was amusing Add some subtitles, not sayong its hard to understand but for some it can be, so adding some subtitles would help and just make some subtitles, so that viewers have the option of viewing it with understanding better but its always a nice feature to have. but anyways nice entry.

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[Love- A Story]

This was cute

Potential Potential and even more Potential Thats what I get when I start watching this Movie submission, you can really grasp it and enjoy it for all it is, its entertaining, keeps you amused and not boring what so ever, Some fixes and improvments may come later but I have to say I was pretty taken back with this, especially the start of it. You have some cute-ness to this one and I really like the smooth animation that you have presented here it was all a good story, I wouldnt mind some more "COLOR" mixed in there. What's also amazing is how there are so many good elements in this, yet it isn't a very complicated movie entry, I will say that I am You just never knew what was going to come up next in this. This has some good efforts and done Intensely as it shows, So my Conclusion is that you get my Recognition 100 percent so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
We can come up with some fixes maybe even some smoothing out and come together on this to make a good finished product, Lets load this film up on the maximum possible of ideas. More use of color would be great, more random color uses aswell, other then that this was pretty good.

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[Feliz día de los relojes]

OK

Well ok this is interesting I get it about clock day and all but would have loved to see more "CONTENT" more clock stuff, the flashing was amusing but thought you could have done more in some areas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content ofcourse longer and more use of clocks.

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[Shirt N' Pants]

Interesting piece

Well this was an interesting piece and I like all the elements you gave this was actually kind of funny and really do like the concept of it all. the designs are really good while "SHORT" still pretty impressive, nice job all around.

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