XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PMP Blog 3]

lol

Ok so those voices are just different, gets really high pitched and scratches on the mic, but regardless it was a good design of characters, the convo's between these characters and the audiance was a nice concept, I wouldnt mind seeing some subtitles, but it was a decent flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was amusing Add some subtitles, not sayong its hard to understand but for some it can be, so adding some subtitles would help and just make some subtitles, so that viewers have the option of viewing it with understanding better but its always a nice feature to have. but anyways nice entry.

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[Love- A Story]

This was cute

Potential Potential and even more Potential Thats what I get when I start watching this Movie submission, you can really grasp it and enjoy it for all it is, its entertaining, keeps you amused and not boring what so ever, Some fixes and improvments may come later but I have to say I was pretty taken back with this, especially the start of it. You have some cute-ness to this one and I really like the smooth animation that you have presented here it was all a good story, I wouldnt mind some more "COLOR" mixed in there. What's also amazing is how there are so many good elements in this, yet it isn't a very complicated movie entry, I will say that I am You just never knew what was going to come up next in this. This has some good efforts and done Intensely as it shows, So my Conclusion is that you get my Recognition 100 percent so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
We can come up with some fixes maybe even some smoothing out and come together on this to make a good finished product, Lets load this film up on the maximum possible of ideas. More use of color would be great, more random color uses aswell, other then that this was pretty good.

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[Feliz día de los relojes]

OK

Well ok this is interesting I get it about clock day and all but would have loved to see more "CONTENT" more clock stuff, the flashing was amusing but thought you could have done more in some areas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content ofcourse longer and more use of clocks.

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[Shirt N' Pants]

Interesting piece

Well this was an interesting piece and I like all the elements you gave this was actually kind of funny and really do like the concept of it all. the designs are really good while "SHORT" still pretty impressive, nice job all around.

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[My Willy Won't Go]

Amusing and Entertaining

I certainly Have found that this entry was amusing, entertaining but most of all it kept me wanting to see more, not for the quality but because it was a little something differant then most of the other flash movies that do come thru here, so I do like that you have put the efort to not be the same but change it up abit. This was a pretty cute flash you made it simple yet it was very entertaining, and I was highly amused, and you really have something here I say go with it. You had some Enhanced ideas that built up some Momentum and Overall became the engine of this flash and that made it fun and worthwhile ofcourse. Those are just a few things that kept me interested.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I am Constantly always looking for new stuff and to see what new ideas come thru the portal, And Reflecting on this it was different but was also a Bonus So I have Prepared some fixes, or clean ups maybe even a few Re-Invent options for some ideas here. I think you really have an idea here and i believe you can extend this even more maybe into a "MINI" series of movies and sorts, but this is really a good concept.

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[Power Star 4]

great film

Now Criticisms aside Before I get started on the details and such, I just wanted to say a few things in a more enlightening way of the flash, first off it was a refreshing flash entry and showed off some decent skills here and there and what not.
and here you have a great flick with a match up of mario vs luigi wich was fun and you had some really good "MUSIC" to match up well and the fight scenes were pretty impressive aswell, I like what you have done here. the "EFFECTS" are really good in this one, The Concept really had me here as it did Grasp the audiance aswell, There are only a few spots that could be cleaned up or Ironing out but the Conclusion here is that this was like Visionary idea and project and I had some good enjoyment out of it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So maybe here we can modify a few things just have to be Prepared aswell as Visualize your ideas into new heights and beyond, So I have a few Proposed Changes and its as small as just a few Minor Details. This was really impressive i would say some subtitles but it was good as is.

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D-SuN responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed it. I'd love to have another crack at a fan sprite film - one day indeed!

[Lost Farts]

Interesting

Well this was interesting the animation could use some touching up and whatnot, but the actual toon here was interesting and somewhat entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
When it comes to the actual animation, throw in more movement, more animating, there was not much of this or just too little of animation and movment, so more animating is a plus here.

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[John McCain]

Entertaining

Sometimes you see alot of flashes and once in awhile you get someting differant and unique like the one you are presenting here, this one is pretty interesting and has some good visuals that really get you into it. Haha this was amusing and I like the "MUSICAL" touch you added to this, I think some subtitles would have been really great for this piece. but overall this was good. To Produce and even Clarify this kind of flash would not beas easy or hard you have done what you needed to at the right times, and was a great Opportunity to see.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well I hope today I may have a tad bit of Influence on some possible fixes and clean ups here and there, Apply a few new options here, that may or may not Include the best of ideas, but you can always Tweak various parts of ideas and whatnot, Focus is the key.Subtitles are tricky but this flash seems like it could use some, not in a bad way or anything just that extra feature is nice to have in any flash especially when there is alot of talking among characters and such, so adding subtitles seems like this flash would do really great from.

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