XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Willy Won't Go]

Amusing and Entertaining

I certainly Have found that this entry was amusing, entertaining but most of all it kept me wanting to see more, not for the quality but because it was a little something differant then most of the other flash movies that do come thru here, so I do like that you have put the efort to not be the same but change it up abit. This was a pretty cute flash you made it simple yet it was very entertaining, and I was highly amused, and you really have something here I say go with it. You had some Enhanced ideas that built up some Momentum and Overall became the engine of this flash and that made it fun and worthwhile ofcourse. Those are just a few things that kept me interested.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I am Constantly always looking for new stuff and to see what new ideas come thru the portal, And Reflecting on this it was different but was also a Bonus So I have Prepared some fixes, or clean ups maybe even a few Re-Invent options for some ideas here. I think you really have an idea here and i believe you can extend this even more maybe into a "MINI" series of movies and sorts, but this is really a good concept.

~X~

[Power Star 4]

great film

Now Criticisms aside Before I get started on the details and such, I just wanted to say a few things in a more enlightening way of the flash, first off it was a refreshing flash entry and showed off some decent skills here and there and what not.
and here you have a great flick with a match up of mario vs luigi wich was fun and you had some really good "MUSIC" to match up well and the fight scenes were pretty impressive aswell, I like what you have done here. the "EFFECTS" are really good in this one, The Concept really had me here as it did Grasp the audiance aswell, There are only a few spots that could be cleaned up or Ironing out but the Conclusion here is that this was like Visionary idea and project and I had some good enjoyment out of it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So maybe here we can modify a few things just have to be Prepared aswell as Visualize your ideas into new heights and beyond, So I have a few Proposed Changes and its as small as just a few Minor Details. This was really impressive i would say some subtitles but it was good as is.

~X~

D-SuN responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed it. I'd love to have another crack at a fan sprite film - one day indeed!

[Lost Farts]

Interesting

Well this was interesting the animation could use some touching up and whatnot, but the actual toon here was interesting and somewhat entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
When it comes to the actual animation, throw in more movement, more animating, there was not much of this or just too little of animation and movment, so more animating is a plus here.

~X~

[John McCain]

Entertaining

Sometimes you see alot of flashes and once in awhile you get someting differant and unique like the one you are presenting here, this one is pretty interesting and has some good visuals that really get you into it. Haha this was amusing and I like the "MUSICAL" touch you added to this, I think some subtitles would have been really great for this piece. but overall this was good. To Produce and even Clarify this kind of flash would not beas easy or hard you have done what you needed to at the right times, and was a great Opportunity to see.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well I hope today I may have a tad bit of Influence on some possible fixes and clean ups here and there, Apply a few new options here, that may or may not Include the best of ideas, but you can always Tweak various parts of ideas and whatnot, Focus is the key.Subtitles are tricky but this flash seems like it could use some, not in a bad way or anything just that extra feature is nice to have in any flash especially when there is alot of talking among characters and such, so adding subtitles seems like this flash would do really great from.

~X~

[Nocturnus]

Deep

And as I get started on this submission entry, I found it entertaining it even gets better as it plays thru and such, Now while its just the start of things I think you really have something here, so keep going with that. Here with this one you had a deep feel and all the dark touches really came thru, nice effects and some good story you have pushed forward here made for a good little flash here. So there are lots to be inspired about especially with all the wonders that flash brings including new ideas and whatnot, aswell as the fans and the joy your work may bring them, So keep up the good work and positive vibe.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright here we are again, And I just want to say spray on the positive ideas and make this a refreshing piece, But from what I can see you have done most of that, It may just need a touch up or two, lets see what we can come up with. Not really sure how to improve on this piece as it was very well done, nice effort all the way.

~X~

[TTA-AF1]

Kinda short

Well kind of short here, and the whole "BUTTONS" thing was so 2000's haha not but really this would be better off as a movie type with no buttons but for sure add more content.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The plot was simple and seems like it could use more depth more stuff going on more things to keep the viewer really interested in your movie, Give more info on characters, places, and when, these are something that could have more depth to them. just something to think about.

~X~

[SpriteTT#6:Sonic]

Notbad

Well this was notbad, It as fast paced and you have shown the effort and the animation was well done, I like the action scenes in this, not much of a fan of sprite flashes but this was still pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The back rounds are ok but thought you could have added a tad more it was just too much like the characters, maybe something diferent.

~X~

[Legend of Miyamoto]

Fun

And once again we have another flash here with some interesting visuals and some intersting scenes, I was pleased with this right from the start it grabbed my interest, now dont get me wrong there is some areas that does need some improvment and suggestions of making it better, and theres a number of ways that you can go about that, but more about that later, Kinda neat how he was in different games and such I think that was the best part of this and the quality was pretty good and art / animation was top notch aswell. So I thought the Opportunity here was great I love reviewing these kinds of movies You Produce something and it has some success A Definite keeper for the portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok so here is where we get to try a few things and see how they workout well atleast suggest some stuff, and see how we can improve on things, and lets make it a fun and pleasent experience for all who see this. not exactly sure with this particular flash but you had the right idea, the music was cool maybe an option should be to change things up a tad like a music changer of sorts.

~X~

[Good Samaritan]

cute

A decent start to a flash here, I really like what you have here, there seems to be some good qualoity about all this and, I really like your style with this, so this gets my vote atleast to a good start in the right direction. So keep up what you are doing, and go with the positive points and work on the weaker areas and make them stronger. This was rather cute flash kind of short though, but I still found it interesting and amusing. So Not your finest Not the worst either. But I did find this animationto be somewhat intersting with some entertaining values, that gave me some interest in it, I wouldnt mind seeing this go longer and what not but have to say I was pleased with it besides a few improvment suggestions that could be adressed. And ill get to that soon enough, but for now this was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Decent flash here but could have some fixes and upgrades to making it much better and fixing these little details will help it greatly and overall smooth it out. I could see this being a tad longer to show off more of the skills and talent all around.

~X~