Interesting
So I found this one to be interesting, you really put some effort into it and it keeps my interest, so that I did not get bored easily wich I can tend to do in some of these flashes, but with this one you did ok, so its a good presentation, nice all around. I like the subtitles, and the artsy like characters it was the "SOUND" that was kinda low sounding, but other then that it was entertaining You a hve a decent flash here, but there there is still some room for improvments even a few little things here and there, but in the end it can only help you and make your flash much better and again in the end more enjoyble for all who see it such as myself.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there is always some idea that can change things for the better, And all it takes is a small change here or there, I will be gladly to offer some tips and tricks here for some possible improvments. I think the sound was the only issue here that and maybe it could be a tad longer.
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