XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SS music video]

lol cute

Well once again we have come up with a fun idea with cute and qwerky music, mario is always great, and these films of yours are always entertaining in someway or another.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more differnt scenes, new content would be great.

~X~

[Super Mario: Toads Rage 6]

I like it

I found this submission a delight even though there are some things that could be cleaned up a tad I found alot of nifty things about this and that made it pretty interesting so nice job. But with all Criticisms aside there are various endeavors to look through this flash. This was a really good production, lots of great characters awsome animation and even a pretty good story to go along with it. you really make it into a story of epic portions. I Endorse this interesting flash So here in the end you have shined up the edges and made this shine with some flavor, this was a pleasure and I do hope you keep making stuff like this as it was a good effort so nice job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The only way to get better at flash is to create more stuff and submit more stuff. You have proven that you can draw and that you have your own style, The onlything here would be to have some "VOICES" to go along with the convos that mario and other characters have with eachother.

~X~

[K&K-Cat Problems]

lol

Haha well this was funny cute characters fun ideas and some ok humor but the jokes could be much better maybe a little more effort in that areas and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More work on the jokes, they are ok but neem more ump to them.

~X~

[Power Star]

Entertaining Film

And so right from the start this entry yielded lots of fun and shows off right away and as I do continue on I have hopes for the the rest and glad how this has started. Lots of action in this one the sprite work is pretty good, and I like the tid bits of "HUMOR" you gave this so nice job all around. And so an entertaining experience we have come up with here, there are some things that you could do to make it better but I will leave that for later, but for the mostpart I was entertained with your movie entry here. You are a great Visionary of flash and it shows with this submission, Glad I had the Opportunity to check this one out today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Converting some of the latent potential to actual plus points is where you need to focus your efforts, some of the areas that does need some work is not all that much, For the most part you have covered it all, maybe adding some "DIALOG" between chaacters would be one way.

~X~

[My power]

Notbad

This was actually notbad I like that the stick characters are not so "DULL" and you gave this film some good action with fighting you even gave some good "MUSIC" to go along with it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more "FLASHY EFFECTS" would be a huge plus for this film.

~X~

[Mac and JayJay]

LOL

Well this was kind of odd but it was very entertaining, the characters were good, and the animation was notbad, but the "VOICES" need much work and there was some static in the backround when the voices were in play.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a better mic to remove the static, and more effort in the voice acting.

~X~

[Planetoid - Original]

Artistic

So nothing really dirty on this one all good and clean work, And it shows with each new scene that comes up, And I hope you do continue on that element, As this was a pleasure. This was pretty artistic and the "ANIMATION" was smooth and delightfull, this also really works with all the music and smooth animating and you seem to tell a story with this submission, so nice effort here. And that was that the ending was good as we do come to the ending of this and the submission I was more impressed with how you ended it so good job there and hope to see more of your interesting and entertaining work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a great production of a flash, Here in this review I have been discussing the good and the bad, But to be honest I didnt find any bad but maybe continue on the story as it was interesting maybe in a mini form of mini flashes or something.

~X~