XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[my first animation.. EVER]

Notbad

Well this ws something nifty and different I like the drawing side of it but this could be so much better with some color some audio or music and also think about adding a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" to stop the looping.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This would be alot better with some added audio and or sound/fx, no sound at all kinda just brings the quality down, so add something of sound and you have a wide selecion in the audio portal at your desposal. It seemed like an interesting idea on it's own, but it was rather short, which took away from the humor a bit,This was really short, so maybe adding more to it and or adding more short clips to this entry making it a longer more fuller flash submission, so its an idea. maybe adding a few short ones on this one entry would be a better choice. So i see that this movie starts and loops, you can fix that with a stop action code, what that does is stop the loop and it will play when the user/viewer clicks on the play button, now you should have a play button and a replay button aswell, anyways just an idea to make this better.

~X~

[Spider-Man Animated Short]

Cool

Now this was pretty cool I like the spiderman theme here and this animation actually looked really good the audio seemed like it could be better though, nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe adding more quality to the sound and audio it would get static sometimes.

~X~

[Space rocket]

Nifty and artistic

Another good entry we have here, and its always a pleasure to find some interesting and appealing submissions like this, allthough some do need more effort, but still nice to find,a nd with this one I can tell the effort was done just needs a tad more effort on some areas, You have certainly made this entry interesting and Enticing so nice start here. Wow I must say this was pretty impressive it was very artistic with the colors and fun music, some extra effects wouldnt hurt but it was still pretty good. And with everything just said I certainly found this to be interesting, entertaining and some allurring visuals so nice efforts there, it was even pleasent, So thats tells me you did a pretty good job on this piece, but anyways I was pleased with the outcome of it all, and hope to see more like this with even more effort aswell, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As Advised here are a few things tips and suggestions that could make it better for all, maybe just adding a few extra special effects would be a huge plus here so just some things to think about.

~X~

[Robins Revenge]

Cool

And another outstanding film from ages ago, but this kind of work with the detail and the characters you have done very, and again I really like the music you pushed here really made it like a movie experience so nice job all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well while this was pretty good, and I had a good time with this one and the other one, I will suggest that making each scene a tad bit longer aswell as have some diaolog among the characters would be a huge plus.

~X~

[Two-Face]

This was interesting

I really how this gets started and the character work is not halfbad, the "MUSIC" made this work well, and you make it like a real movie and thats what kept me interested here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I believe the onlything here could be that it can be longer and there can be some diaolog among chavrters.

~X~

[FUCK YOU SUCK DICK]

haha

And another one of these strange yet funny videos, but they never get old for me again I must say these would be more entertaining with much more content more imgaes and so on, but besides that I had fun with this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
these would be more entertaining with much more content more imgaes, just some things to think about if you ever do these kinds again.

~X~

[Meat Grinder]

Nice work

This one shows that you are making a difference and it shows well in your work so nice job and proves to be a nifty piece, this reviewer is impressed aswell as a new found fan. There are some things you can Refine but Quite Frankly this is a unique and Absolutely fun experience. There is some really nice work here lots to see some really great detail and graphics, and was fast paced detail, so nice work there. So I will close out this one now but before I do, This submission yields lots of fun I do hope you keep this kind of flash up, because its pretty nifty if you ask me, This has some good design principles so keep up the nifty work its obvious that your endeavors here are paying off.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok So to start off this interesting flash entry, it was actually ok and had some good interesting stuff going on I thought it was fine as is and does not need any changes.

~X~

[WADEZILLA IS THE BEST!]

Funny

Well here is another amusing one, the song was cute the flashing was a tad much, but it was still entertaining and I found it to be amusing, maybe make this go into more different scenes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Funny but could use more content more scenes.

~X~

[SS music video]

lol cute

Well once again we have come up with a fun idea with cute and qwerky music, mario is always great, and these films of yours are always entertaining in someway or another.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more differnt scenes, new content would be great.

~X~