XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy Birthday Dom!]

Very short

Haha dont get me wrong this was very funny and a good flick of a submission if you ask me great art and you pulled off the joke well, but In my opinion this could be better with either more content or other short clips along with this short one, just an idea to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice film here, But I should comment that the things that are of a small concern would be that they are too short and they could use some extras a few more atleast and that would give the whole flash entry more depth, so adding a few more episodes per flash entry would be a good effort on your part. anyways nice effort.

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DJaxsNG responds:

This is pretty old, dude. And it was a birthday gift from DomFera.. back then, short videos seemed to be fine. It's 2016 now :)
The improvement was already achieved. But since my stuff isn't short anymore. It's taking me a lot of time to finish a long animation, that's for sure.

But again.. it wasn't an episode. Just a short animation gift. But I thank you for the critique. :)

[MVC3 F*CK]

This was amusing

Haha this was both cute and amazing the art style and color use was brilliant I love this style and the ausio was great, some decent "VOICES" all around a good flick you have here.

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The only thing here would to make this longer infact I can see this going as a series of episodes. just an idea to think on.

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[Banned Toy Commercial]

lol

Well this was funny and gave me a laugh or two, it was just very very "SHORT" and it loops over and over there are a few ways to add to this and fix it. it was a good little clip though. infact that reminds me since it is kind of short you can add other "SHORT" clips along with this one to make it a submission with lots of short animations and that alone will ad some good qaulity to this entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The one thing about this was that it was too short and could either use a longer depth to it or could use other short animations with it, just something to think about when putting more quality to a short flash. Stop action code was really needed with this one, it loops over and over and with a simple stop action code, it could stop that and its fairly easy to put in only takes up one key frame, there are lots of tutorials on the site on how to do this if you dont know, anyways think about adding a stop action code.

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[my first animation.. EVER]

Notbad

Well this ws something nifty and different I like the drawing side of it but this could be so much better with some color some audio or music and also think about adding a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" to stop the looping.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This would be alot better with some added audio and or sound/fx, no sound at all kinda just brings the quality down, so add something of sound and you have a wide selecion in the audio portal at your desposal. It seemed like an interesting idea on it's own, but it was rather short, which took away from the humor a bit,This was really short, so maybe adding more to it and or adding more short clips to this entry making it a longer more fuller flash submission, so its an idea. maybe adding a few short ones on this one entry would be a better choice. So i see that this movie starts and loops, you can fix that with a stop action code, what that does is stop the loop and it will play when the user/viewer clicks on the play button, now you should have a play button and a replay button aswell, anyways just an idea to make this better.

~X~

[Spider-Man Animated Short]

Cool

Now this was pretty cool I like the spiderman theme here and this animation actually looked really good the audio seemed like it could be better though, nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe adding more quality to the sound and audio it would get static sometimes.

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[Space rocket]

Nifty and artistic

Another good entry we have here, and its always a pleasure to find some interesting and appealing submissions like this, allthough some do need more effort, but still nice to find,a nd with this one I can tell the effort was done just needs a tad more effort on some areas, You have certainly made this entry interesting and Enticing so nice start here. Wow I must say this was pretty impressive it was very artistic with the colors and fun music, some extra effects wouldnt hurt but it was still pretty good. And with everything just said I certainly found this to be interesting, entertaining and some allurring visuals so nice efforts there, it was even pleasent, So thats tells me you did a pretty good job on this piece, but anyways I was pleased with the outcome of it all, and hope to see more like this with even more effort aswell, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As Advised here are a few things tips and suggestions that could make it better for all, maybe just adding a few extra special effects would be a huge plus here so just some things to think about.

~X~

[Robins Revenge]

Cool

And another outstanding film from ages ago, but this kind of work with the detail and the characters you have done very, and again I really like the music you pushed here really made it like a movie experience so nice job all around.

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Well while this was pretty good, and I had a good time with this one and the other one, I will suggest that making each scene a tad bit longer aswell as have some diaolog among the characters would be a huge plus.

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[Two-Face]

This was interesting

I really how this gets started and the character work is not halfbad, the "MUSIC" made this work well, and you make it like a real movie and thats what kept me interested here.

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I believe the onlything here could be that it can be longer and there can be some diaolog among chavrters.

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