XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[wade for president]

Hmmm

Well this was sort of interesting the artwork was actually notbad, but this seemed kind of short even if it was a trailer or not but it was entertaining regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make this a tad bit longer, For it to be a decent trailer you should give facts and scenes of whats expected in the full version some action scenes would be nice but most of all give it enough content that will entice the viewers to want to see the upcoming full version, just a little here and there in a trailer to really grasp the viewers attention.

~X~

[STARBARIANS - Episode 1]

Very entertaining

Another reminder here on how passion drives every step and brings success a long way as you have done here, and this is right on there with all the other positive flashes out there, So keep doing what you do because I have enjoyed this one.
The animation and character work was great the "HUMOR" was pretty good aswell, a good animation here and very good quality here nice job Maybe some improvments can be made but I will post that in that section of the review, There was a few instances here and there that can be better, Good luck on your future endeavors.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we go with trying to make it better then it is with a few improvments sometimes this is the hardest points of suggestion as sometimes some flashworks dont need touching but in some cases they do, so I will do my best here to pinpoint a few ideas and tips of improvment for either this and other projects, so try a few new things and let it shine. The only thing this really needs is maybe some more special effects, and maybe some added subtitles, but other then that this was great stuff.

~X~

[CODE GREEN]

Notbad

A nice sprite action flick here, fun battles good scenes, there was some lacking areas like some bland spots in the backrounds and more special effects would be a plus.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More special effects, more explosions and more stuff happining in the backrounds.

~X~

[StickDudeKillingArena4:Ex]

This was kinda nifty

Well I must say this was nifty and had a lot of different stuff going on, also with some good sound/fx it was pretty good I thought, a good stick fighting flash here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More different scenes would be nice.

~X~

[The Noob Adventures Episode 8]

Awsome

And so I do find this entry to be elegantly carved, and still while there could be some things that can be much better I will get to that in the improvment section, but for now lets get this review going deeper into things. Wow didnt know this was about minecraft I really like minecraft stuff so this was pretty good I thought, the animation was pretty good and it was entertaining so nice job there. So as I get to my Closing Remarks I will just say Showcase your work as best as you can, It was Refreshing and pleasent and is obvious that you know what you are doing. This is a Definite keeper for me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And as for improvment, its always a hard choice I thought, but this was pretty solid, so if I do suggest anything for imrovment it may be just a few things, like maybe some extra special effects and flashy explosions and what not.

~X~

[LF2:The Alliance Ch.2]

Nice

This was actually pretty nice, the "SPRITE" work was pretty good and you showed some good action, you even have a good "STORY" going on here, the "VOICES" could use some work they need more passion and effort. A larger view screen would make this a tad bit better, as it will allow you to see more of the details in the actual visuals, just an idea or two there. nice flash you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the voice work could use some work they need more passion and effort. A larger view screen would make this a tad bit better, as it will allow you to see more of the details in the actual visuals, just an idea or two there. also I would suggest that instead of the story playing out with a next button just let the story flow with no buttons, it will bring more quality to the story itself.

~X~

[hot ham water 6-8]

Kinda short

Well I must say this was interesting I like the song and like the "VIBE" this had on it, it was just too short though, but maybe if they are that short you can ad a number of short flicks and put them all together in one submission then that makes this one submission more of a quality one just something to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ading more short clicps in one flash would be cool.

~X~

[Happy Birthday Dom!]

Very short

Haha dont get me wrong this was very funny and a good flick of a submission if you ask me great art and you pulled off the joke well, but In my opinion this could be better with either more content or other short clips along with this short one, just an idea to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice film here, But I should comment that the things that are of a small concern would be that they are too short and they could use some extras a few more atleast and that would give the whole flash entry more depth, so adding a few more episodes per flash entry would be a good effort on your part. anyways nice effort.

~X~

DJaxsNG responds:

This is pretty old, dude. And it was a birthday gift from DomFera.. back then, short videos seemed to be fine. It's 2016 now :)
The improvement was already achieved. But since my stuff isn't short anymore. It's taking me a lot of time to finish a long animation, that's for sure.

But again.. it wasn't an episode. Just a short animation gift. But I thank you for the critique. :)

[MVC3 F*CK]

This was amusing

Haha this was both cute and amazing the art style and color use was brilliant I love this style and the ausio was great, some decent "VOICES" all around a good flick you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The only thing here would to make this longer infact I can see this going as a series of episodes. just an idea to think on.

~X~