XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[16-bit Adventure [-OLD-]]

Cute

Lol this was entertaining there was some good jokes in this one, that "NEXT" scene button has got to go you really dont need that next button just let this animate like a movie, you have a decent littel animation here and mario is always fun in any movie.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
button has got to go you really dont need that next button just let this animate like a movie.

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[Rough Stick Battle]

Notbad

Well I like all the action on this some nice blood effects and such but this one needs sound and even some music, you have some nice animation skills but some nice music would be great you can even find some free music and or sound/fx in the audio portal to help you chose something really good. but this was nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some nice music would be great you can even find some free music and or sound/fx in the audio portal to help you chose something really good.

~X~

[Rotten bananas]

Nice work

This was cool, I like the voices and like all the clay-mation stuff, toobad these couldnt be longer, you could make some backrounds and maybe even some other characters but for what it is, its pretty good stuff, I have enjoyed it very much. I really look forward to seeing more stuff like this, untill then keep working on great stuff. nothing else to say except keep up the effort in this one and future flash stuff you have planned. Anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, some new characters, some backrounds.

~X~

[Clock Trek]

Nice

Congrats on the award that was well deserved, I am loving the theme here with star trek and all you really pushed that idea forward and made it funny too so star trek and clocks makes a really good idea here, I can see you making this into some sort of series or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a series of animations you really have a good idea here.

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[3 STEPS]

Entertaining

This was entertaining not sure what this was all about and seems like it lacks alot of stuff but does seem like it has some potential to be even better, because you could really take this far with the cute characters, but will take you making this longer and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it longer give it more plot more flashy effects and just more all around as a whole.

~X~

[Jack: preview]

Notbad

Well this was ok but the "VIEW-SCREEN" could be larger so that you can see much more allthough there was not much there it was a short trailer and you should ad much more content to it, but kudos to you on a decent trailer and nice sounds, it was decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs to be longer and could be a larger view screen.

~X~

[Jimmy Pee Hallween advice]

Nice flick

And here was a nice flick Jimmy is good this toon could have been a little bit more amusing and maybe even longer but I like what you did bring to the table it was entertaining maybe more jokes next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More jokes more humor next time

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #10]

Nice work

notbad as always I noticed one thing new is that the anmimation on the mouth does not match up on the sound comming out maybe thats something you could clean up or something, but this is pretty entertaining the dialog between the serge and the little girl are really good stuff lol. I really took a liking to this flash, and grew on me there was lots of nice stuff on this, and overall got a good feeling from it and was great to see, now ofcourse it could be better and with some more effort it can be just that, so hope soon to see more of this and much more of your work, anyways untill then keep it real. and keep making these kinds of nifty flash submissions. anyways untill next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I noticed one thing new is that the anmimation on the mouth does not match up on the sound comming out maybe thats something you could clean up or something

~X~

[i say potato]

Randomly funny

This was very entertaining all the jpegs are amusing, and the song here really drove this and all of its randomness a very good style here you put some interesting elements into this so nice job there, really freaky stuff but I cant help but laughing it was great.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more stuff like this.

~X~