XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fisticuffs]

Really short

Well this one was kind of a short one but I can understand that with it being sticks and all, and the battle ofcourse, you could make a whole bunch of these animations and bunch them all together with other ones so that you have a flash of multiple choices of short flashes. Anyways keep up the nifty flash battles.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more plot, and ad some color. you could make a whole bunch of these animations and bunch them all together with other ones so that you have a flash of multiple choices of short flashes.

~X~

[Gaia Blade I (Now fix)]

Nice action

This one has some nice action in it, love some of the fancy effects and such in this, the artwork is really good and the animation is smooth, you have a decent flick here, and as for improvement , anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I will suggest some voice dialog to make the story have more drive.

~X~

[16-bit Adventure [-OLD-]]

Cute

Lol this was entertaining there was some good jokes in this one, that "NEXT" scene button has got to go you really dont need that next button just let this animate like a movie, you have a decent littel animation here and mario is always fun in any movie.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
button has got to go you really dont need that next button just let this animate like a movie.

~X~

[Rough Stick Battle]

Notbad

Well I like all the action on this some nice blood effects and such but this one needs sound and even some music, you have some nice animation skills but some nice music would be great you can even find some free music and or sound/fx in the audio portal to help you chose something really good. but this was nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some nice music would be great you can even find some free music and or sound/fx in the audio portal to help you chose something really good.

~X~

[Rotten bananas]

Nice work

This was cool, I like the voices and like all the clay-mation stuff, toobad these couldnt be longer, you could make some backrounds and maybe even some other characters but for what it is, its pretty good stuff, I have enjoyed it very much. I really look forward to seeing more stuff like this, untill then keep working on great stuff. nothing else to say except keep up the effort in this one and future flash stuff you have planned. Anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, some new characters, some backrounds.

~X~

[Clock Trek]

Nice

Congrats on the award that was well deserved, I am loving the theme here with star trek and all you really pushed that idea forward and made it funny too so star trek and clocks makes a really good idea here, I can see you making this into some sort of series or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a series of animations you really have a good idea here.

~X~

[3 STEPS]

Entertaining

This was entertaining not sure what this was all about and seems like it lacks alot of stuff but does seem like it has some potential to be even better, because you could really take this far with the cute characters, but will take you making this longer and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it longer give it more plot more flashy effects and just more all around as a whole.

~X~

[Jack: preview]

Notbad

Well this was ok but the "VIEW-SCREEN" could be larger so that you can see much more allthough there was not much there it was a short trailer and you should ad much more content to it, but kudos to you on a decent trailer and nice sounds, it was decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs to be longer and could be a larger view screen.

~X~

[Jimmy Pee Hallween advice]

Nice flick

And here was a nice flick Jimmy is good this toon could have been a little bit more amusing and maybe even longer but I like what you did bring to the table it was entertaining maybe more jokes next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More jokes more humor next time

~X~