XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Sergio Show Episode #10]

Nice work

notbad as always I noticed one thing new is that the anmimation on the mouth does not match up on the sound comming out maybe thats something you could clean up or something, but this is pretty entertaining the dialog between the serge and the little girl are really good stuff lol. I really took a liking to this flash, and grew on me there was lots of nice stuff on this, and overall got a good feeling from it and was great to see, now ofcourse it could be better and with some more effort it can be just that, so hope soon to see more of this and much more of your work, anyways untill then keep it real. and keep making these kinds of nifty flash submissions. anyways untill next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I noticed one thing new is that the anmimation on the mouth does not match up on the sound comming out maybe thats something you could clean up or something

~X~

[i say potato]

Randomly funny

This was very entertaining all the jpegs are amusing, and the song here really drove this and all of its randomness a very good style here you put some interesting elements into this so nice job there, really freaky stuff but I cant help but laughing it was great.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more stuff like this.

~X~

[Promenade the Puzzle]

Wow just beautifull

So there was aloy going on here esepcilly with tweens and lighting effects but you really pushed this one forward, Well this was something different and your flick has shown a lot of nifty elements You do some amazing work, we need more stuff like this one, its full of energy.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A beautifull piece the music and sound could be a bit better quality.

~X~

[Dirty Power Part 4]

This is good

This one is better then the rest, and like the action scenes in these, graphics looks great as usual, so a big A-Plus from me and you have a really nice story with this one, some things could still be worked on, voices, and next dialog vutton, nice work though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well good flick, I still think you need to lose that next scene button it is really not needed. and voice dialog is much needed. try some changes out.

~X~

[Dirty Power Part 3]

Story is nice

So I really like how this story plays out and the music is really good, I still think you need to lose that next scene button it is really not needed. but one thing you need the most here is the "VOICES" and some voice dialog, it would really make this series alot better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I still think you need to lose that next scene button it is really not needed. and voice dialog is much needed.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #9]

Nice again

And nice work again on the animation, there are a number of things you can do to improve on something like this and I have suggested a few ideas, sound quality, more shades and detail in props, new characters new outside scenes, So with all that said, this was pretty decent, allthough it could use more stuff and such, also suggested below, it was still pretty good just needs a tad more effort but it will pay off just keep working on it, and always do what is fun to you because that will make for a good flash so anyways keep up the awsome work, creativity is your friend. this one was notbad, not as funny as the cheeseburger one, but still gave me a chuckle.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested a few ideas, sound quality, more shades and detail in props, new characters new outside scenes

~X~

[Dirty Power part 2]

Nice work

And here was another good sprite film and you really did better with this one then the first the music was a very nice beat and flowed well with the whole piece, I like this for a number of things but you did make something enjoyble here and it was fun to review.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Let the music go on a loop so it dont stop half way thru.

~X~

[Dirty Power part 1]

Hmmm ok

Well I saw the other part 1 and there doesnt seem to be much of a difference at all but for the mostpart this was still pretty good still seems like almost the same flick, you should still remove that next dialog button its just anoying, other then that it was alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Remove next button.

~X~

[Bass meets Storm Eagle]

lol

Well not sure what to think about this one it was sort of wacky but that was the entertaining part the sound and music get anoying when it gets loud maybe thats the ideas but for the mostpart it was an amusing little movie you have here it could be better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more plot then randomness.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #8]

lol

Alright lets really get into this review but before I do this was something nice and you bring some solid elements to the table. And another amazing episode, so I am really getting to enjoy this one, just the sound quality needs work it still goes in and out and such, the ideas you bring forward into these are pretty good and amazing and you execute them well and make for a funny story. the idea here with this one was lol funny. This was fun to review so its my pleasure and I hope you keep making stuff like this, You have a nice submission you have presented here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the sound quality needs work it still goes in and out and such, think about cleaning that up.

~X~