XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[It's time 2/2]

Nice

And the story really unfolds here and the story really gets good here so nice job on this one, you really put in some effort and time in this mainly the story and it really payed off so nice job on that, I look forward to seeing more of these amazing flash films.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing much in this one its pretty solid.

~X~

[It's time]

Nice

Another nice animation and as always great story great characters and really good voices seems like you should link up mouth animation and actaul sound it seemed a tad bit off. but besides that this was a pretty good animation flash here, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should link up mouth animation and actaul sound it seemed a tad bit off.

~X~

[What a crazy bitch! 2/2]

Nice work again

And even for an older flick this is still pretty good, the characters animation voices and action are all top notch, Awards are not always something everyone can get but its nice when you can so awsome job on getting some awards for this flash. But anyways nice animation here really good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Sound could be a bit clearer but for the mostpart it was pretty good.

~X~

[The world against you]

Ok

Well that was amusing, it was actually pretty funny It was a tad bit short and you may want to put a stop action code in there as there was a loop going here, but besides that it was actually ok, just make it longer next time. but for sure stop that loop lol.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and fix that loop, this is an easy process with some simple action script code, its called a STOP-ACTION-CODE now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell, There a bunch of tutorial flashes on newgrounds that will easily show you how to do this, in the end it will only help your flash to run better and smoother. A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short I would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece. just try some things and make it longer.

~X~

[Valentine for SwearBear]

Funny

Lol well I will admit this one gave me some laughs and a few chuckles you really made something good here and while it was kind of 3d it was still good kinda sad how it ended but still a funny yet sad little story you have here, sound was notbad but could be better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Sound quality could be better.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #7]

Nice

I like that you change up the "INTRO" seems like these earlier episodes had more great "IDEAS" like going out of the studio and doing stunts and other things, so you should really push ideas like this they make it very fun and entertaining. the sister is funny lol. This was a decent flash, now ofcourse there were some things that could be better and fixed and such, stated a few of them above and some more tips added below, these tips should help to make it somewhat better if not maybe they will give you some ideas, but even if you didnt use any of these tips you have a decent idea here with this flash, I look forward to seeing much more of your work in the near future. Untill then keep up the fancy work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More ideas outside the studio, more guests, more stunts, more jokes etc.

~X~

[the pathetic state]

A deep emotion of a flash

So yes a deep emotion of a flash, That was a very moving and I will say artistic flick, A few things could make this better, first of all make the view screen much larger and ad some color also, and this could even go longer, But overall a good deep seeded flash here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things could make this better, first of all make the view screen much larger and ad some color also, and this could even go longer.

~X~

[Noir Chaos]

Fun movie

Well this was a fun little stick movie here I could see you adding a few things for some improvement such as make this longer,and ad more color backround and other sticks also bringing in some type of flashy effects would be a plus. just some ideas that could help better this movie.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas above hope it helps.

~X~

[Stick Fight _ 01]

Decent stick flash

So first off I think improving on the stick characters making them more character like would be a plus. adding more flashy effects would also be nice for this movie. Besides that this was actually notbad at all could be a tad longer and more plot to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding more flashy effects would also be nice for this movie. I think improving on the stick characters making them more character like would be a plus.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #6]

Cool again

The intro was funny this time, I do like that you do give this some decent humor and it did make me chuckle a few times, sergio needs more people on his show, maybe some celebs his sister his friend etc, but you have an entertaining piece here, After seeing and messing with this one I thought it was great, its a decent flash there is room for improvment, and you should think about adding some new stuff as mentioned below and even in the above review lines, it will be great for all, anywayskeep up the work I like the effort you put in sofar, and look forward to seeing more. anyways untill next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Detail in the studio for sure.

~X~