XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NWAR: Carte Blanche]

Unique

This was a unique style of animation and there was a lot of narrative in this but I think that's what made this very good and detailed for sure and just an overall good movie so nice job here and I look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would like to see more action put in this

~X~

[Unemployment]

I liked it

So I liked this for the art and different designs they had a very artistic style and showed off some nice detail the animation was not too bad but seems like the animation could be smoother and just flow from a to b much more fluid but that's something to work on other then that this was a really good piece with a nice style overall

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improved animation is needed

~X~

GrahamDrawsButts responds:

Great advice! Thanks!
Yeah maybe I need to animate on more frames or get the motion down pat... Hopefully I'll figure it out when I get to working on my next animation!

[WOMAN PUNCHES A DOG!]

Good stuff

A great idea here and seemed like you really put a lot in this the woman was not so woman though the art was well done and the animation was notbad either the execution of the humor was kinda funny but I could see you putting more effort in making more jokes and more longer scenes for those jokes but overall this was a very good piece of work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer scenes for more jokes to take place

~X~

[That was a Close One]

I like it

So I like the frame by frame style and there was a nice little battle there graphics we're notbad and animation was not too shabby the action scene can be longer and more intense but besides that this was a nice piece over all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More longer scenes especially the action scenes

~X~

[Universal Donor]

Very nice

Now this was something very good the story here really drove the element and made the story to strive for so very nice with that I do however think you could do some work on the animation it could be smoother and flow better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better flow of the animation could be better

~X~

[Trees Freestylin']

Notbad

Well this one was notbad the tree oh the tree nice art though and some ok animation this was actually pretty creative and you bring a nice style. Some artsy style of happenings and overall a nice animation I was pretty impressed with your work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I didn't find anything wrong with this it stands alone on it's own creative styles so no need to change it or fix it

~X~

[what rare candy does to your pokemon]

Wow

Congrats on the daily that was cool and I like how this has some good results the animation was very good and the narrative on this was pretty good and I thought you did very well on this there were some small skips on the audio

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some clean up on the audio or it could be on my end

~X~

[My shitty show]

Notbad

Well I have to say this was very short but the characters are fantastic sharp looking and very crisp the voices are very good but I would ad subtitles just to have an extra feature you have some good talent but I would think about making these longer and into a long running series these characters really have something good and can go a long ways

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer make a series here and some subtitles would be great

~X~

[Asteroids Tutorial]

So notbad

So I have to say even as old as this is it's still a pretty good piece of work it still helps in a way but it is outdated but still I find it to be some good work and hope you make some newer stuff sometime but anyways keep on doing what you do

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
An upgraded version would be a plus

~X~