XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[It's Snapple Time!]

Different

Well this was different I like the whole dark side of it all and how it is pretty good in animation and made me luagh so that's a plus and the animation was really good and smooth and seemed to work well from one to the next I would love to see you make this longer though it's a good animation with humor so nice effort on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be stretched longer

~X~

Abider responds:

Cheers for the feedback and rating, happy you enjoyed this!

[The Sergio Show Episode #21]

I like this series

So this is a good series and I like what you have done here the characters the humor it all seems to come together in its own way and while some things could be enhanced you still braught us some nice ideas and humor as always, so nice work here on a funny episode. so anyways decent flash, some ok entertainment value, and it was presented well enough to understand it all so nice job here. Some ideas could be suggested below so hope that helps. and hope to see much more of your work in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should do more of these back in time ones

~X~

["Cheese"]

short but cute

A short yet sweet little animation you have here the animation was really welldone the "STORY" or plot was simple but you made it into something decent here so that was a plus, would have liked to see you stretch out the story more, but it was actually notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer and a lil more into the story but notbad on what you presented.

~X~

[Strawberry Clock's Dream]

Epic

Here is something very epic allthough very short lol, this could have been much longer, much more visuals it had a great start but you just never know with clock movies, I still enjoyed this for what it was, and that was its entertaining just like all clock movies.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer make it with much more content it just was so short allthough that may be the intent.

~X~

[Fred]

Wow that was short

Now dont get me wrong you did have some good skills here with this one, art and animation was great but the thing is it was a tad bit short, I could see you adding much more "CONTENT" and just really stretching this out even more, Or Here is another idea that might work why not ad a series of these small short animations all in one flash submission that way you have a longer bit and a much more quality of choice of animations all bundled up together. anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here is another idea that might work why not ad a series of these small short animations all in one flash submission that way you have a longer bit and a much more quality of choice of animations all bundled up together. just an idea that could help and improve on this.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #20]

Cool vibe with this one

And so there was a cool vibe with this one as always the characters are awsome and sergio is always the best at what he does and brings humor, so I like the cool vibe you made on this particular episode, Im sure there are some things that could be slightly better, but overall this was a pretty good tune, not too much to add, except adding more to it but not by much, but great flash I really enjoyed it, heep up the hard work, as I know these flash types and styles can take time. So what else can I say here, except keep up the efforts and keep on putting as much quality as you can, in the end it will show off and shine. as it does now.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small changes but not much

~X~

[brought to you by a bomb]

Nice visuals

This was very impressive and the "VISUALS" are very good with the music this came together well and is now one of my faves on the portal, the singing is really good here I thaught, you presented a good flash here not too long not too short but just right, so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind the words to the song on the video like subtitles.

~X~

[EVER-CHANGE #1]

Creative

Well here was a creative movie love all the use of colors here and very stylish if you ask mme, lots of animation going on and pretty smooth if you ask me, I like the creative style here, the "MUSIC" was a nice touch here aswell, so overall a decent little animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice animation, I think you should enhance the backround maybe with some gradients and over more visuals.

~X~

[EVER-CHANGE #3]

Different

Well this was different I like the designs here and the maze like configurations, Seems like thats all it does but its an entertaining piece you should really think about adding some "COLOR" and making a bigger screen here, it would make it much more enjoyble for the viewer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bigger screen and some color needed.

~X~