XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Cheese"]

short but cute

A short yet sweet little animation you have here the animation was really welldone the "STORY" or plot was simple but you made it into something decent here so that was a plus, would have liked to see you stretch out the story more, but it was actually notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer and a lil more into the story but notbad on what you presented.

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[Strawberry Clock's Dream]

Epic

Here is something very epic allthough very short lol, this could have been much longer, much more visuals it had a great start but you just never know with clock movies, I still enjoyed this for what it was, and that was its entertaining just like all clock movies.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer make it with much more content it just was so short allthough that may be the intent.

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[Fred]

Wow that was short

Now dont get me wrong you did have some good skills here with this one, art and animation was great but the thing is it was a tad bit short, I could see you adding much more "CONTENT" and just really stretching this out even more, Or Here is another idea that might work why not ad a series of these small short animations all in one flash submission that way you have a longer bit and a much more quality of choice of animations all bundled up together. anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here is another idea that might work why not ad a series of these small short animations all in one flash submission that way you have a longer bit and a much more quality of choice of animations all bundled up together. just an idea that could help and improve on this.

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[The Sergio Show Episode #20]

Cool vibe with this one

And so there was a cool vibe with this one as always the characters are awsome and sergio is always the best at what he does and brings humor, so I like the cool vibe you made on this particular episode, Im sure there are some things that could be slightly better, but overall this was a pretty good tune, not too much to add, except adding more to it but not by much, but great flash I really enjoyed it, heep up the hard work, as I know these flash types and styles can take time. So what else can I say here, except keep up the efforts and keep on putting as much quality as you can, in the end it will show off and shine. as it does now.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small changes but not much

~X~

[brought to you by a bomb]

Nice visuals

This was very impressive and the "VISUALS" are very good with the music this came together well and is now one of my faves on the portal, the singing is really good here I thaught, you presented a good flash here not too long not too short but just right, so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind the words to the song on the video like subtitles.

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[EVER-CHANGE #1]

Creative

Well here was a creative movie love all the use of colors here and very stylish if you ask mme, lots of animation going on and pretty smooth if you ask me, I like the creative style here, the "MUSIC" was a nice touch here aswell, so overall a decent little animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice animation, I think you should enhance the backround maybe with some gradients and over more visuals.

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[EVER-CHANGE #3]

Different

Well this was different I like the designs here and the maze like configurations, Seems like thats all it does but its an entertaining piece you should really think about adding some "COLOR" and making a bigger screen here, it would make it much more enjoyble for the viewer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bigger screen and some color needed.

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[Imp, episode 0]

Funny stuff

So this was notbad a funny film if I say so myself there was some good animation the "VOICES" were pretty funny too, I think if im gonna suggest anything at all here it will be some "SUBTITLES" but you have a funny and entertaining flash film here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Sub-titles would fit so well with this film, I can understand for the most part whats being said but it would make it overall better and some people may enjoy that option.

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[Thomas the Tank Engine: Origins]

Crazy

Haha this one was pretty crazy and some nice aspects nice graphics a good animation if you ask me it was very entertaining but the idea behind all this was a little horrid lol but still good flash animation very good stuff you have the idea even if it was a crazy and wild one but still enjoyed this for what it was

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this one
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[Free Ice Cream]

Nice

So this here was a nice story and there was lots of depth in the story so props to you on that aspect of things the animation is where you could have improvments make it so it flows much better and more of it needed anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improve on the animation

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