XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cam Super Sayin]

Entertaining

This was an entertaining flash you have here, the animation was notbad, but the "ART" and drawings needs to be refined and payed more attention of, more smoother lines and better frame rate in this whole piece actually. also adding a stop action code will stop the "LOOPING" just some things that can hekp you improve on this animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
drawings needs to be refined and payed more attention of, more smoother lines and better frame rate in this whole piece actually, and one last thing ad a stop action code.

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[The Sergio Show Episode #28]

Artistic in its own way

A budget cut back lol This one was artistic in its own way and you have proved that here, I do like the style you bring into this series and make it feel very artistic, the characters are great the backrounds could be better, but overall you bring a sense of humor and joy to it all making for a good series here. Good flash funny and amusing, and in the ending notes of this review, it was something dfferant with some nice visuals and has some entertainment value and thats something we all look for, so in my opinion you did great here, keep that style up. there were some things that could be changed but for the most of this submission it was actually alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thaught it was fine as is.

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[The Appointment]

Very nice

I already like this and how it gets started, the "CHARACTERS" are very welldone, greaphics on characters are very slick and welldone once again, you have a really good story, only problem here is the voices is muffled and you may want to ad some "SUBTITLES" but besides all that this was very good indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some subtitles the voices are muffled.

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[Tankmania Movie Intro]

Nice Flick

A nice short movie you have here almost more like a game and the music is pretty good aswell, it drives this and makes it an even more fun flick to watch I like the ending with all the explosions, you should ad much more explosions through out the whole flick.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more explosions.

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[The Sergio Show Episode #27]

A fantastic style here

Interviews are great and sergio did his best lol Here was a fantastic idea and everything sergio does is pretty amusing I love the side characters they really make the show work well along with sergio, and while the art could be better its still a funny piece you have here, so keep up these episodes as they are pretty fantastic, Im not sure I saw any real negitive points needing improvment, most of this was pretty good so nice effort there, I do look forward to more of your works though, as this was notbad and kept me interested and didnt bore me, it was highly amusing, anyways keep up the decent flashworks. It was pretty good and I look forward to much more of your work. Anyways untill next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now that the episodes are moving along it gets much better

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[First Grade]

Nice

I dont remember school like that, but I suppose it could have been, but besides all that this was a decent little animation, you have a nice flow of animation and the idea here was what made it even more better, the art and animation are simple so I could see that being improved on at some point.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see more effort and detail in the art but not by much.

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[I Said Knock Knock]

Notbad

A decent flick you have here there was some unexpected elements in this but I believe that was your idea and intent, and I will say congrats on the award and awards thats always nice to have and a good gesture, but as for your flash works its nice and look forward to even more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe a tad bit longer more flashy effects all over.

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[Chris and EJ #1]

Notbad

So this was notbad the characters were not too shabby, the music was cool and seemed fitting especially for all the action scenes actually the music really seemed to work well here. the "NEXT-BUTTION" is what I had some issues with you may want to upgrade it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So those buttons so small, Now with buttons its ok, but if you let it flow more like a movie without the buttons it will run smoother, to me in my opinion the buttons seem to slow it down and tends to get anoying with all the clicking, so try it out with removing the buttons, if you dont like that style you can always go back to the other way. But for the mostpart it seems better if it was flowing like a movie without the buttons.

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[Epilepsy Go Away]

Entertaining movie

Well that was a tad short but kind of amusing, so first off I like your little gimmics here made it much more entertaining some nice animation here aswell, You can make this much longer though maybe add some more content into this one somehow, anyways nice animation here even if it is a short one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can make this much longer though maybe add some more content into this one

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[The Sergio Show Episode #25]

All In a nutshell

So all in a nutshell you have shown us a lot of episodes and here is an example of a brilliant episode, now while some things could be better it was still full of adventure and entertaining value, and I was very highly impressed with all that you have presented here. So as this review comes to a short end, it was a decent flash of good portion, could use more stuff here and there and some smoothing out on some areas, but I thought in the end it was just right and fittng with all that was happening so it was alright with me. So with all that said maybe your next project will be just as good if not better And I have to say birthdays are great even for sergio

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more birthday bashes

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