XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DP 5 - The missing fight]

Nice

The sound didnt kick in till later so maybe thats something that can be cleaned up at a later date, there was some good scenes in here and its always fun with sprites and such a good flash here if you ask me and I did enjoy this just needs work on the sound.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the sound and music kick in a lot sooner

~X~

[How not to rob a bank]

Interesting flick

Theres a few things you could do to make this better now dont get me wrong I like this, but the next scene button is not needed just let it flow from scene to scene like a real movie might flow forward, also more detail in your characters stick only is ok but could be better. overall a nice flick here. This was one great Discovery of some interesting ideas and an even better concept as it all plays out, I really like what you do and what you have done here, And so an entertaining experience we have come up with here, there are some things that you could do to make it better but I will leave that for later, but for the mostpart I was entertained with your movie entry here. You are a great Visionary of flash and it shows with this submission, Glad I had the Opportunity to check this one out today It was a fantastic piece and nice vibe behind it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the next scene button is not needed just let it flow from scene to scene like a real movie might flow forward, better designed characters also needed.

~X~

[TurdClock's Journey Pt. 2]

Good story

The clocks and there silly voicees lol, you presented a good story here with a sort of plot and you made it funny and amusing, this flash film does need some "SUBTITLES" though mainly for the clocks robotic voice lol, but it was an entertaining little flash you had here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some subtitles would be a huge upgrade here.

~X~

[Communist Rap]

Entertaining

Kind of like a "MUSIC-VIDEO" this was all great stuff and was like a music video with lots of stuff going on love the use of red in the video you should make that vid screen much larger though, but besides that this was actually pretty entertaining stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A larger view screen would be a big plus here.

~X~

[Mario & Jacko]

lol

This was amusing and funny, gotta love that music though marios music was a bit static, but there was lots of good music in this and that made it very good kind of like a dance off and you made some nice animation with this one, so nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some static on the music could be cleared up somewhat.

~X~

[Throwing Apples (clay)]

Clay

Well you dont see these clay movies everyday so its always nice to catch one now and then this one was actually pretty good, you could use some subtitles and maybe add more clay characters into the story but it actually was pretty good stuff, not too long and not too short.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more characters more story, and even some subtitles.

~X~

[Creeper]

Entertaining

My one question is why is his head always facing upwards lol, but anyways as we move onto other parts of the movie it was actually pretty entertaining stuff, kind of short and I didnt know what was going on but again entertaining stuff, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer ad more content.

~X~

[Contract Killer]

Entertaining

Well I must say this was pretty entertaining and you did pretty good with this and the animation was notbad theres a lot of tweens in this though and the "ROBOTIC" voice could be replaced with actual voices, just a nice option that would make things better, the movie itself was notbad though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change the voice to real voices and make this longer aswell as less tweens.

~X~

[Worms: Kamikaze]

Cute

Now here was a cute animation, lots of action going on here and nice style, the worms are cool and you made them cute and have adventures lol the art style is pretty good if you ask me, the animation was not too shabby either so nice work here indeed, I like this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fancy effects in there would be great.

~X~

[Miss Dynamite XVIII]

Very amusing

This was very amazing but then again this series always brings out some very amazing animation and that animation is very smooth and just flows from one part to the next it's the jokes that keep me laughing as you bring some nice humor to that series now I will say I would like to see more random jokes just to change it up now and then

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as mentioned and suggested some more jokes but more random ones

~X~