This was really good
I love the visuals here the giant creature is kind of nifty with some nice view shots here and there the little girl had expressions too, I like the "NO SUBMISSION EVER EXISTED" ending lol, So while you can make anything great you can go even farther with a few twists and turns it was both Delighting and Luscious a First-Rate experience.
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Would love a full fledged toon with other characters you have some nice ideas that you could really take far.
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