XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Locked]

Cute animation

a cute little animation here, I did think it was kind of "SHORT" maybe it could be longer with a few more scenes or something because the idea you have here is pretty good if you ask me, This Format is always different. This is kind of like a race and you have to keep the pace up you can optimize with creativity and bring fourth good content but you have to enhance your race experience in this case your flash direction.

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maybe it could be longer with a few more scenes or something

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[A Premature Decision]

Cute and amusing

Lol these cgharacters are funny and this was some good stuff the "VOICES" were pretty good too, you should continue this on as a series or something, A nifty movie idea here, and I took a good liking to it so I will look forward to whatelse you can make from this and other stuff, but as for this one. you did a great job, allthough some parts could be better, and you can throw in other ideas aswell, you have raised the bar though, What you have Designed here is very impressive, and that alone I give you credit.

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you should continue this on as a series or something

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[Let me stand just one more time!]

Notbad

And this was notbad I like it the story is good the voice is notbad but could have more emotion into the story also adding some subtitles would also help that and smoother animation would be a plus you have good stories just need a few polished areas

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added polish

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[Dalton taking over part 2]

Cool

So this was cool I like the story one again I do think more improved animation is in order now don't get me wrong I like this and think it could sore because the story is pretty decent maybe even adding some better dialog anyways nice film here

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Some more polished and more improvments needed

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[God help me not them!]

An interesring piece

So here I am reviewing this and your other films as for this one I can see some more smoother animation could be pushed. The art style could also be polished a tad bit you do have a good story to go with it though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a few upgrades

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[Yonder Ho! - Episode 12]

Nice

So I don't think I have had the pleasure of reviewing this and glad I found it seems pretty good I love the different ideas pushed in this and you have a good idea with future style stuff Wich I may ad is my fave kind of stuff but anyways you have some amazing talent and a beautiful piece of film here I look forward to much more anyways nice job indeed

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I don't think it needs any changes but it's a pretty positive piece and enjoyed it

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Bertn1991 responds:

Aww, thank you so much for the kind review. That means quite a bit to me. I'm glad you like the style and ideas. Hopefully I'll have more episodes in the future. Thanks again.

Respect <3

[Game Grumps Animated - Peach Gone Wild]

Haha

So this was actually a pretty funny movie I have not been a fan of every game grumps stuff but I have to say that this particular one was pretty amusing and gave me some good chuckles so nice job on this one very amusing you should make more related to this one

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Make more related to this one

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[Tendril]

Nice

So this was kind of cool and I like the idea here you have a nice sense of detail and I think how you use the color effects are even great I love how this all played out so really nice job here and nice elements of effects so nice job indeed and do hope you make even more

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[Madness Assasination: KT]

This was notbad

Well I have to say that this was actually not a bad film you have some good ideas in here and the flow of the story was good I do think some improved flashy effects could be added but not really by much and overall but I liked it so nice job hope you make more

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