Amazing
The view point here is amazing some fantastic visuals you really push the effects here on this doom element and 3/D effects, my suggestion would be make it longer and maybe some added scenes, And so the portal always has alot of shiny like Entries And you never really know whats what, But I am glad that your Entry is the real deal, It has a true shine and glow. Not to drag things on, I will try and end this review soon, but before I do I will suggest some improvments, but for now I just want to say that I have enjoyed this and there was some pretty entertaining things about this submission.
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my suggestion would be make it longer and maybe some added scenes
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