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[Clock Day '18 retro]

Retro

So this was pretty nifty I really like the "RETRO" idea here the dancing skellitons was very good a nice little animation you have here for clock day made a nice little entry, this was not short and was actually really good quality a bit differnt from what Im use to seeing with clock movies of the past, you should make more of these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more great clock films.

~X~

[WEST TREE HERO FORCE]

Cute movie

So this was a cute little movie you have here, I really like these "CHARACTERS" and you had lots of scenes so you could really see the effort put in that reminds me maybe you could make some type or form of series from this unless you already have, but it was an entertaining piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe you could make some type or form of series from this unless you already have

~X~

[Cute Robbery]

Funny

I had a feeling something was gonna go bad lol, but anyways really good characters and the "VOICES" were really good so props to you on the voices, the "BANANNA" was just brilliant, it was a tad bit short and seemed like you could have made this one longer a few more scenes maybe she chases the clerk around town or something, You have a Splendid effort here that has Earned a Golden Victory but I would say among a few changes here or there this was Absolutely a good find today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
was a tad bit short and seemed like you could have made this one longer a few more scenes maybe she chases the clerk around town or something

~X~

[Dover Boys ReAnimated Project!]

Wow nice

It really does have that old style "TOON" from the music at the start to the old style art style was really impressed with that most of all, Maybe ad some subtitles to go along with the wonderfull voice narrating, Alright so all the stuff you put in this movie reminds me of a good party because you have hosted something interesting and fun, Kind of like a party in the portal and you keep people happy through out, So onto more of the film now.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe ad some subtitles to go along with the wonderfull voice narrating

~X~

[Space]

Good dedication

Wow the word "SPACE" can send you into a strange moment haha, you really put some energy into this, love all the different scenes and art styles and love the vibrant colors, Dedication is key in all films or other works, and will make a good Victory you have Morphed some simple concepts and ideas into some more advanced options, So my Opening Remarks are just that, this is a good start.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I honestly dont see the need for any changes this was solid.

~X~

[Pmation: "Pail Problems"]

Nice

I like the addition of the "PENCIL" and eraser really nice idea there, as my tip for this entry I might suggest some flashy effects on impact moments lighting and dark effects aswell, I love the flow of animation here and love all that you do with color and how fluid the animation goes from a to be, and you bring some nice little stories here and make them come alive with the very smooth animating skills so very nice work here, It's hard to offer a lot of critisism on this, And once again we have another decent flash, theres not alot I can say to improve on this but there are some things that could be cleaned up as menioned and below, but for the most of this its pretty good and I liked everything I saw here, Andlook forward to seeing more of this, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as my tip for this entry I might suggest some flashy effects on impact moments lighting and dark effects aswell

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #94]

I like it

A good episode as he "TALKS" about animation then boom his uncle apears very nice, I would suggest some subtitles just as an extra idea, So I like it, you have convinced me on a whole other level, and while some things can always be fixed and polished, its the humor that you really make work, sergio is simple but he always finds himself in these odd situations, and thats what I have come to love about these and this one, very good stuff, you should make the sister a main character, I know she is but she is always funny. My Ending Remarks on this flash submission, are that its a fine flash movie entry, there seems to be alot going on, and it does bring an entertaining value to the front tables, And I was Excitedly watching this film as it kept me interested, and glued to the screen, so nice strat to a good flash submission here, and I look forward to more of what you have for us. Not to bore youany longer I will try and bring this review to an end of sorts, But you do have a good Opportunity to make things better with the improvments if any, You have a Refreshing flash submission here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some subtitles just as an extra idea

~X~

[Flush the Wave]

Long loading

So for 1 meg it is still a long loading time not sure where you can optimise on that most of the time its the music, the flick was actually not half bad and had some interesting aspects about it the "MUSIC" was pretty cool and drives the film, anyways a nice little flick you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
long loading time not sure where you can optimise on that most of the time its the music,

~X~