XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stamp on the Ground]

Nice animation

So I like the "DDR" theme here this was pretty cool and the "MUSIC" was pretty fitting the animation of the characters was just as good so this was cool, I wouldnt mind some added flashy effects like have the arrows light up when they are on them maybe even a beam of light from each contact, just an idea, So never be afraid to induldge into something new and different here, You can make things great with some twists and turns I am glad to have checked this one out.

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I wouldnt mind some added flashy effects like have the arrows light up when they are on them maybe even a beam of light from each contact, just an idea

~X~

[Rav Alone]

Very nice animation

So this was a cool piece I like these little characters you have here and the animation was kind of smooth, also the use of color on these characters and backround was notbad at all kind of artistic, this was very short though, I would love to see you extend this a tad more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this one longer or ad some other short flicks with it.

~X~

[Moon Boys]

Nice visuals

Well I have to say that this was a nice little story you have here, and the visuals were nice, good flow of animation i like this more for the story, I wouldnt mind this one being a tad bit longer though, it was a good little flick though so keep making stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be a tad bit longer.

~X~

[Initial xD]

Entertaining

So this was an entertaining piece you have here the film flowed well and the animation was pretty solid, the "CHARACTERS" are really good, I love how you take this into different view scenes and such, and the voices were pretty good the humor was notbad but could be better, anyways nice flick.

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the humor was notbad but could be better

~X~

[Oh Cheesy!]

Haha

Well it was cheesy just a tad, was not too short either but seems like you really put some work into this one, I like the simplistic art style on this one you really made it work well and this one did give me a laugh or two so thats a plus as always, but anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you have something here and should think about making more of these like a series of some sort.

~X~

[Bad Dream :(]

Haha

Ok so this one was rather cute very funny and amusing I really like the color on this one, love the vibrant use of color onlything I was not too fond of was that it was just way too short, it was very entertaining though and gave me a chuckle, so nice little toon you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer.

~X~

ChutneyGlaze responds:

Thanks X I will make it longer just for you!

[The Bravest Knight]

Nice story

I like this this was actually a pretty good story here it seemed like it could be longer though, maybe more to the story but I do like the animation and each scene it plays into its a decent submission you have presented here, so nice work indeed hope to see more from you soon.

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t seemed like it could be longer though, maybe more to the story but I do like the animation

~X~

[Bad Dream]

Entertaining

Well this was entertaining the character work is pretty good, the "EFFECTS" in the backround are pretty nifty, I think if you added some subtitles in that would be a nice little added feature not needed but would be a nice addition to this fun film of yours.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added subtitles would be nice.

~X~

ToddCircle responds:

Ok thanks :-D
I didn't know subtitles in music videos were a thing so...... subtitles now added

[Shroomy Chaos / Paranoia]

Nice animation

wow this was really nice I love how smooth this animation is you have some nice view point here, the color the different scnes was really nice work, so I was really impressed with this piece, Onlything I would suggest on this piece might be adding some more scenes and making this longer, but it was a decent film here.

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Onlything I would suggest on this piece might be adding some more scenes and making this longer

~X~

[Homework in a nutshell]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I like the idea here doesnt seem to be much animation on this one though, and thats something you could work on a bit more animation more scenes etc, that would really make this whole piece alot better, but the idea you have on this one is pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more animation.

~X~