Entertaining
So this was pretty entertaining I like the idea of this and like the whole concept you have some good ideas and this was a nifty design of charchter work especially the pic character animation was smooth a very nice toon here as for improvement I would just say make more of this like a series or something it has really good potential to be a series of some sort
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You should make a series out of this
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