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[The Sergio Show Episode #78]

Cleverly imagined entry

Ok besides the sound and volume issue and even no "SUBTITLES" I still enjoy these episodes cant wait for some new ones and I might ad that a new studio would also be nice, Sergio seems to make some cleverly imagined entries as you have done here great character here really good structure on this whole piece even. And here we have a "CLEVERLY-IMAGINED" entry, and im sure there will be lots of Criticisms but aside from all that I have to say That I Absolutely Like the idea of this and as I review this its just the start of things. but now lets really get into this. So keep them comming. I am glad I had the Opportunity to see and review this, some tings you could Clarify better, but Overall this was a decent submission. And so thats that a nifty little flick you have presented us with, nothing too fancy but still good enough from start to finish.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok besides the sound and volume issue and even no subtitles I still enjoy these episodes cant wait for some new ones and I might ad that a new studio would also be nice

~X~

[Goodbye You Little Shit]

Random

Well I have to say this one was kind of random but I did find this one to be rather short so making it longer and stretching out a few more scenes might be nice, but anyways good film here was funny and random just like I like anyways keep up the fantastic work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer atleast a few more scenes.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #85]

Entertaining

Well this was entertaining but then again "SERGIO-FILMS" are always entertaining and I like the style here with all the stuff you put him through, The "SOUND" issue bugs me but I understand but maybe a better mic or recording program would sufice, this one was particularly funny and amusing especly the ending here, I certainly Have found that this entry was amusing, entertaining but most of all it kept me wanting to see more, not for the quality but because it was a little something differant then most of the other flash movies that do come thru here, so I do like that you have put the efort to not be the same but change it up abit. This was a "REFRESHING-CONCEPT" And I had lots of fun with it, and hope to enjoy more of your works sometime soon in the near future, So I will keep an eye out for your work soon enough. I fully Endorse this one for its efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The sound and volume issue bugs me but I understand but maybe a better mic or recording program would sufice

~X~

[Goku Super Saiyan Transformations (Fan Animation)]

Kind of short

Well not sure if it was a "TEST" or what but it was really short, now I do like the "ANIMATION" of it all and I can see it having more glow effects and more lighting effects when he is poering up but thats just a small idea to think about, anyways nice animation here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I can see it having more glow effects and more lighting effects when he is poering up but thats just a small idea to think about, maybe even adding more depth to it maybe even some sort of story.

~X~

[Sick Puppy - Lemon Demon]

A nifty video

So this was a nifty little "VIDEO" I also like the options of lyrics or no lyrics, the animation itself was pretty good not great but just right, I do wish you made this longer maybe even took it into different scenes and whatnot, Awards come and go I suppose but I thought this was very deserving of the award could have even won more, but awsome job on all the work done here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do wish you made this longer maybe even took it into different scenes and whatnot

~X~

[Fluffy Mob]

Different

Well it was a bit confusing at first but I liked it the animation of this was pretty cool and you showed a nice little story here that came alive with the idea so props to you on that aspect of things, not sure what else to suggest here as it was a solid piece of work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More understanding at the start and in the descriptions.

~X~

[Pmation: "Teeth For Two"]

All In a nutshell

I love how these start off so pleasent then something "BAD" happens like the female character checking on him at the start, but its all in good "FUN" My suggestion is the same ad some voices into these that would be a real plus, So this was all in a nutshell, because you put all this energy into this and it shows, these characters are funny even if they are not as fine tuned as I would like but they are still very entertaining and the color and humor is what I really enjoy about these, so Keep making these. And so as I start on this submission, it has some interesting points, some not so interesting parts aswell, but I guess thats what the reiew feedback is for, for what works and what doesnt work, But it starts off kind of so-so but does get better, I was pleased with a few parts and hope the rest does get better, But I will suggest some feedback later. And well there you have it, it was an alright flash could have some adjustments but thats for later, but for the mostpart this was still an interesting and somewhat entertaining submission, there are a few more suggestions but thats for later aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My suggestion is the same ad some voices into these that would be a real plus

~X~

[Toy Guns]

Another entertaining

So here we have another entertaining film with these funny and "ADORBLE" characters and as always the "VOICES" are just as amazing you seem to always come up with a cute little script here and with the added "JPEGS" it seems to work well so nice job indeed on this amimation series you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some subtitles

~X~

[Trampoline]

Always entertaining

So these are as always very entertaining, these little adorble "CHARACTERS" so cute and the voices really great stuff, I still suggest you ad some subtitles it wouldnt hurt, This one here is Entertainment a Grand adventure with various ideas Utilised in just the right way, you have Earned some points from me on this one so nice effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I still suggest you ad some subtitles it wouldnt hurt

~X~

[Kirby calls out Mario (Animatic)]

This was cool

I am really in love with the kirby "VOICE" you did very well here and made it work, some areas you can really push it a bit more but for what it is this was really nice work, also adding more emotion would be a plus on some elements here, anyways nice work hope to see more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would love to see more of these maybe even longer.

~X~