XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Plato's Allegory of The Cave [the Escape]]

Nice stick animation

So this was a nice "STICK" animation it was not very loud in action but you did present some nice action scenes, love all the blades and such, I think you should ad some music behind this maybe something fast paced, but besides that this was a decent animation you have here.

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I think you should ad some music behind this maybe something fast paced

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webfox01 responds:

Thank you for the feedback, i didn't understand why i should add music , i already added music to the action parts, the rest of the animation like in the beginning, it didn't need fast paced music, care to show me an example of where i should've added music ? as in the timing.

[Blockhead Ghostmas]

Extraordinary Flick

I love his "VOICE" wish you had some subtitles in this one though, An Extraordinary Flick that you have created here for us all to enjoy with these novies, they have a certain quality about them and some nice element and the main character as always a great character with all the adventure he goes on about, very nice submission here.

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wish you had some subtitles in this one though

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[DK Reanimated Scene]

Haha

Well that was kind of funny, very short though but the "ANIMATION" itself was really good I do wish this was a tad longer though maybe a few more scenes would sufice and would be brilliant for this character, anyways nice job here cute little animation you have.

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Notbad of a film, A very short toon you have here, too short if you ask me, you can add more shorts to this one so that theresmore to see, but just the one short seems like a waste, besides with more shorts all together more people will enjoy it much more, and allowing for a better outcome and score. but I liked what you presented.

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elgordo11x responds:

Thanks! But this is actually apart of a collaboration project where tons of animators do individual scenes of a cartoon and put them together. Thanks for the feedback regardless!

[The Dr. Mario Show & Knuckles]

Cute

A "DR-MARIO" theme and that head in her "TOOTOO" was absolutly funny and pretty amazing I did think this particular one was kind of short so maybe a few extra scenes would sufice seems like this has some great potential on it, anyways nice work here hope to see more.

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I did think this particular one was kind of short so maybe a few extra scenes would sufice seems like this has some great potential on it

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[Ytown Public 6]

Another episode

Very nice adding some subtitles would only make this even better but more towards the bottom, So here we have another fine episode on this short series of yours I do have to say is that this was an entertaining one, the characters really do just jump out at you with some funny characteristics about them, I like the story that plays out on this one with some good entertaining fun.

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adding some subtitles would only make this even better but more towards the bottom

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[The Return Of Nazo: Part 3 Trailer]

Nice animation

So here was a nice animation starts right off into an intense "BATTLE" the different view shots are very impressive some nice effects in there and while its a trailer cant suggest much to it but its a good start to something good So I do look forward to some full version soon.

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while its a trailer cant suggest much to it but its a good start to something good So I do look forward to some full version

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[Samurai VS Dinosaur]

Wow nice

That was really a "SHORT" animation but the visuals were pretty intense the music was pretty good too, you really pushed the limits on this but does need to be longer more scenes maybe even some story to it would be a good idea, anyways really nice work here.

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does need to be longer more scenes maybe even some story to it would be a good idea

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[Clash Royale Animation #1: GIANT SKELETON VS KING (Parody)]

Cute animation

So I found this "ANIMATION" to be pretty "CUTE" the little battle and cute characters was just a fun and "REFRESHING" film, I really liked it it was fresh and cute and dont see any need for any changes unless to make it longer but overall it was a good toon you have here.

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dont see any need for any changes unless to make it longer

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JannerBros responds:

Hi there Xwayne! Thanks for your valuable comment .....I just focused on making it short and funny .... sure i will try to make it longer!! and thanks again! Have a good day!

~JannerBros

[Pokemon Geodude vs Cubone]

Wow awsome

Im an instant "FAN" with this one a clay animation related to "POKEMON" very welldone, Onlything I would change or ad on this might be use some spashy effects for some of the battle points and impact scenes more then what you already have, Victory thats what I would call the start of this one, So here we have a nice effort and a nice flash with something different, and I like the style here and how this all plays out, So lets get something started here. you have certainly Utilised all elements in this flash movie.

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I would change or ad on this might be use some spashy effects for some of the battle points and impact scenes more then what you already have

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[The Bowsette Meta]

Interesting

So there are some interesting things here, And I am gonna check out this entertaining flick, I do like the style you are going with here. so this one was kind of "ODD" and "STRANGE" but it was entertaining the animation was notbad this film was rather short would have been nice if you had added a bit more to it, anyways nice animation here.

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this film was rather short would have been nice if you had added a bit more to it

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