XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[No Mutt November]

A cute animation

Well that was pretty quick of an animation, the animation was smooth just kind of short, so my suggestion would be to make it a tad bit longer, but besides all that this was funny stuff.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
could be longer

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[The Forbidden Jutsu]

Really nice

I am loving the action here especially the lincoln-ish characters you could ad some nice subtitles on this film, Well so its not all the time you see movie works like this especially in a movie form so I was actually suprised with how you presented this and how you let it flow from start to the end, So in that aspect of things it actually does get off to a decent start. Anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good movie submission, There could be some small changes but overall this is a decent entry you have here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could ad some nice subtitles on this film

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[Paper Bunny]

LOL

A cute little animation the wind is a nice idea almost feel like you could have made this go even longer maybe some extra scenes chasing the clothing and such, nice animation you have created.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
could use more funny scenes

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yarharcannon responds:

Yo thanks for the constructive review!
I've omitted the information that this was a university assignment that had to be a short loop no longer than 10 seconds, but I still really appreciate receiving proposed ideas on how I could improve and expand on it. Thanks!

[The Leaked Ending of Friday Night Funkin]

Entertaining

Lol well while short it got to the point some nice characters just a few couple of scenes made this funny as the joke did hit well so great dark art styles and entertaining humor so nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
none

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[Sock Six]

Very intense

Well as always you have created something of great quality and different I certainly Have found that this entry was good, entertaining but most of all it kept me wanting to see more, not for the quality but because it was a little something differant then most of the other movies that do come thru here, so I do like that you have put the efort to not be the same but change it up abit. This was a refreshing Concept And I had lots of fun with it.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Its top notch stuff doesnt need any changes

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[It's Rude to Stare]

OK

Well it was entertaining for sure even a lil sexy the character design and bounce was pretty good, would have been nice with some added scenes and more depth added but the character was great

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
as mentioned above

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[Rhythm Ep:1]

Cute

So this one was a cute animation with some fun little characters and theres some good action going on I love that you have added some subtitles in this one, really nice work indeed hope you make more like this

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
none

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[Chaotic Heart: Loose Ends (Episode 3)]

Very cool

So this one here was pretty good the animation alone was pretty intense you have some good depth there for no changes are needed The animation is nice but not awesome, Doesnt mean it cant be awsome its actually decent work and is in a pretty goos shape of quality, But it still needs some Tweaking there and here and all around for some better outcomes It does have some interesting and entertaining things. all about it though and thats what drew me to this. But really other then that this flowed well and was pretty solid for the most part.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you have some good depth there for no changes are needed

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[Two in the Pink]

Nice Film

So here was another nice film you have created, love the use of color in this one, I do however think some added subtitles would be a plus on this one, but regardless this was pretty cool.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some subtitles might be cool

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[Hades runs in general]

Entertaining

so this was pretty entertaining it was really short but that ending was pretty awsome great visuals with the flames and such, you present some nice work, just wish this was a tad longer maybe a few extras scenes

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some extra scenes and longer would be nice

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