Nice
So this was pretty good I like how its narrating and some good style of comic element here seems like you could make an ongoing series with different themes and such, anyways good stuff.
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Nice
So this was pretty good I like how its narrating and some good style of comic element here seems like you could make an ongoing series with different themes and such, anyways good stuff.
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But...this IS an ongoing series with different themes and such.
Love this
Has a nice artsy style with the color and paint style but especially the color, my take on this So I have suggested some subtitles options it would be a real plus on your part. and I think the fans would appreceate it, and doesnt have to be anything fancy, just something simple text and all, try it out, it cant hurt, There are some areas that you could refine but for the mostpart this was cleverly done, And I liked it from the start you really bring some talent to the front of the table, I was pretty taken back with what you have presented here there was alot to take in aswell, and it was a pretty nifty and very interesting movie entry you have submitted here so keep them comming.
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my take on this would be adding some nifty subtitles
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Nice stuff
Well I have to say that this was pretty good stuff especially how you start it off and the music in the backround seems to really build as each new scenes comes into play and that was great visual and sound direction so for that alone you get props.
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make more like this one.
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Very entertaining
Well you have a very entertaining film here love some of the random scenes like at the door or text bubbles lol, no changes needed on this fun film here, This was a great opportunity for me to review this you set a standard and I did enjoy what you have here now, hope to find more just like it, I encourage you to keep making stuff like this any additional detail would be great and now the end is near in my review, while I had a fun time reviewing this I still would like a tad more polish but not by much but regardless this was fantastic.
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no changes needed on this fun film here
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I like your style
So while this style here is pretty intersting others may see it as something different but for me its abstract and unique and thats what I really came to enjoy about i and hope upi make more simular films like it
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Dazzling characters
So here was a nice lil film here, with some dazzling characters, the audio and voice work was great you have some nice fun characters all in all this was fun and the end was very amusing so nice job.
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I like it
I like the style here you gave it some really good energy and vibe to really make it work well so for that alone i give you props hope you make more someday
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Very nice
I like that its in black and white seemed a bit dark but still a good flick some parts seem like they could be luminated more but overall a good submiasion
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Nice
So this was notbad and for one of your early first ones seems like you did a great job some nice style here really entertaining so nice job
Different
Your camera views on this is nice and makes it more like a mystery the animation itself was notbad at all so really nice lil film you have here I would suggest maybe have a colored frame so that there is a more intense focus on the black and white anyways great stuff here all sorts of different styles of animation and art here colabs are a dime a dozen but you added a new and unique twist on this specific colab, You have Some fun colab here, the different artists and authers bring some nice element here with the nifty different visuals.
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As suggested
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