Nice film
So I like these characters and the humor gets better love these bench scenes very entertaining How to start this one off theres some interesting things you presented here, But for me this was not half bad had some interesting points and could be better in other areas, This was a decent movie entry and hope to see more of what you have in store for us, So as I get to my closing remarks I will just say Showcase your work as best as you can It will pay off in the end.
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Well this needs no changes it was a decent film you have created here
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