XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Resteraunt Taunt]

((( HAHA )))

OK that was funny, it was very short, but still very funny the best part is when the cig falls out of the guys mouth haha, anywyas my suggestion would be to make it longer with more funny moments like maybe walk into the kitchen and see whats going on and something like that, anyways funny flash keep it up....

<b>~X~</b>

[Darkthought is back]

((( HUH? )))

Ok this was way o short even for me, it startedout good with a city a bomb and all, but after the bomb hit it was over??? you should add more like a plot a story, like maybe the guy escapes and wants to find and take revenge on who did this, but you may also want to add some more color like for the backrounds and so-on, better luck next time....

~X~

[Sonic Epoch ep. 1]

((( REALLY GOOD )))

This was unexpected, i was thinking it would be some simple sprite flash with sonic and all, but you did good with real art style characters and funny to, love the club scene and the "GOOMBAS" haha great battle, and great characters, nice flash i hope you make more of this like a few more episodes its funny and has some cool characters with decent voice-overs....

~X~

[Dangers of School]

((( FUNNY BUT SHORT )))

OK this was good work mostly the art detail and character, i did have to play this two times was not sure if it was just the flash or if it was a bad download, but anyways, great flash good detail like in the backrounds, and decent humor with the crash and cat and stuff, but way to short, would love to see more episodes like this but much longer...

~X~

[Dinosaur Jr. ep.01]

((( POKEMON LIKE )))

This was good, but the characters did remind me of pkemon abit, good characters though and loved the colors and how you used the whole view screen to your advantage, the story was cool, and it keeps one interested, so i do hope you made more as i would love to see more soon, anyways nice flash and great characters....

~X~

[Just another Sunday]

((( NEEDS MORE COLOR )))

this was notbad, i like the main character and the sometimes better drawings of him, those other guys "PLAIN STICKS" were odd, and didnt mix well with the better looking character, then sometimes there was color and sometimes there wasent, it was ok, just abit confusing at times....

~X~

VVithereD responds:

There wasent supposed to be color, due to how most "crap" flashes dont have any. And the ugliness of the world around the main character was intentional.

[Star Fart - Episode 1]

((( STRANGE )))

This was stramge, but cool, very sci-fi, it was strange because of how they talked but that made it neat somehow, i did notice that this flash would loop over and over, you need to add a stop action code, and a play button aswell as a replay button for the end, anyways an ok flash just more on the strange side....

~X~

[IM RPG intro]

((( UM OK )))

Well notbad but it drasticly needs more detail, and most of all more color, like the ending was great and had use of the full screen but the starting was very dry and lacked color and effects, its a good start though, i hope you improve on this....

~X~

MrBigStick responds:

i lost the FLA to this a long time ago.

if i was to go and try to redo this it would probably look a bit better, but my process is usually to animate to the music, just goin' right at it, and then add color last. then if i think it's needed, i'll probably add sound effects.