XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Star Fart - Episode 1]

((( STRANGE )))

This was stramge, but cool, very sci-fi, it was strange because of how they talked but that made it neat somehow, i did notice that this flash would loop over and over, you need to add a stop action code, and a play button aswell as a replay button for the end, anyways an ok flash just more on the strange side....

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[IM RPG intro]

((( UM OK )))

Well notbad but it drasticly needs more detail, and most of all more color, like the ending was great and had use of the full screen but the starting was very dry and lacked color and effects, its a good start though, i hope you improve on this....

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MrBigStick responds:

i lost the FLA to this a long time ago.

if i was to go and try to redo this it would probably look a bit better, but my process is usually to animate to the music, just goin' right at it, and then add color last. then if i think it's needed, i'll probably add sound effects.

[funny duck]

((( CUTE & FUNNY )))

This was cute and funny, there was not much to it other then the good voice acting by the narator, and the duck wiggling around, if you wanted to improve on this you could add some backdrops, and have the duck walk around into different scenes and whatnot, it was decent so hope to see more at some point....

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[Br. vs G. (no sound)]

((( NEEDS LOTS OF WORK )))

This was a flash that could use lots of detail, and you do need some play and replay buttons, aswell as a "STOP ACTION" code so that it doesnt loop over and over, anyways add some color some longer scenes, and work on your characters with more defines detail, ps i did hear some sound....

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[Lüky and Suicide Meg Ep.2]

((( NOTBAD )))

I sorta liked this my only real issue with this one wa sthat the filesize was abit much and could have been alot less then it was im sure many users may agree, but as for the flash itself it was cool and entertaining, nice skills....

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[Cig´s Death]

((( HAHA )))

Great stuff, this was very original, and very neat to see, it was short though, but you presented it well like the cig and his emotions, you could also make this into a series with lots of cig lifes and alll, anyways great job i was very impressed....

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[the ninja attack]

((( NOTBAD )))

Notbad work, i was into it but the ending could have been better, as for the rest well the ninjas were ok but the filesize of the flash was getting up there, you may want to work on that, it wasent that bad of a dl but people with 56k might differ, anyways good job on this, make more soon....

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