((( NEEDS MORE )))
~~REVIEW~~
It had a good start but then sorta just ended, you actually did a nice job on the "CHARACTER" but the flash almost seems unfished, but it looks like you have something there just needs more detail and effort...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters, more shading and detail on backrounds and the character...
~~OVERALL~~
A funny start to a promising flash...
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