XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Mario World DX2 pt2]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was notbad, kinda interesting, seems like it could use more to it though, wasent that long but could have just a few more scenes and such, it was entertaining though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit more scenes and effects for an overall better effect of it all...

~~OVERALL~~
A nice flash very entertaining...

~X~

[Oldies, Art And Unfin]

((( FUNNY AND ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny and entertaining, the colab like stuff was cool, the "MENU" page needs work a more refresher look and one not so bland, nice job though, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A better menu page it needs color and better buttons...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun colab, good animations but could be improved aswell...

~X~

[OtherWorld]

((( VERY IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow that was very impressive, nice work, it started out great and ended with even better style and uniquness, nice work indeed, i would love to see more like this in the near future...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing really its as perfect as it can be maybe just abit downsize but not much...

~~OVERALL~~
A very impresive flash with great ideas and awsome skills, keep it up...

~X~

[P.M.U.L ep.1]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad for a first and seems that you do have some skills with flash but still needs abit more to it, more ideas aswell and some compressing aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big.

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash but you need some more detail and effort, nice try...

~X~

Porateku1 responds:

Thank you for your opinion if you have any more pointer, lease let me know them. I would like to know how to make better animations so let let me know how to use a software that you'd recommend. I use SWiSHmax and I see that it takes upm too much space for the 56k modem users..sorry

[Sasuke V.s. Naruto]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting some good action scenes which made it fun and entertaining, i really emjoyed it and had some fun watching it a second time, now my only issue was the size, but still a good flash, nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improve on the size if you can, maybe cut it down into two or something, still nice work though, keep it up...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and balanced flash needs abit of details and some compressing...

~X~

[Science With Onic]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this made me laugh hehe, the buttn seemed to get anoying after awhile, the different clips of onic was funny thoigh and that poor fish haha, anyways nice flash for the humor...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would lose the buttons and just let it flow like a movie and it wont be so slow...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny clip show kinda like a slide show with some good humor from onic...

~X~

[Pikachu's Heart-Break]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was entertaining, the "SPRITES" looked good, they had a sense of style to them compared to other ones, nice work there, the "TEXT BUBLES" could be better though, it was an overall fun sprite flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some voices for the text bubbles it would improve on the characters and such...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun sprite flash with a unique look to the sprites...

~X~

TylerLandis responds:

thanks for the reveiw! the reason i didnt do voices was because pikachu just says "pika pika" over and over again, and dk makes strange gorilla noises. i thought that might get annoying.

[linkin prk kem 2 my house]

((( HAHA CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this made me laugh, not sure if it was the funny characters, or just the funny "AUDIO" but it was funny, abit short but good use of the full screen and i like the use of color aswell, very funny stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It could be longer, the song was funny i could see more episodes like this, or even a longer version...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny short, with good use of color and strange characters...

~X~

[Living Death]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, hope you got the grade you were looking for, it could use more effort even little things here and there wouldnt hurt, mostly some more effects

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effects and more details all around it will improve greatly...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun class flash but seemed to be abit more then that, nice work...

~X~