XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[WOMAN PUNCHES A DOG!]

Good stuff

A great idea here and seemed like you really put a lot in this the woman was not so woman though the art was well done and the animation was notbad either the execution of the humor was kinda funny but I could see you putting more effort in making more jokes and more longer scenes for those jokes but overall this was a very good piece of work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer scenes for more jokes to take place

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[That was a Close One]

I like it

So I like the frame by frame style and there was a nice little battle there graphics we're notbad and animation was not too shabby the action scene can be longer and more intense but besides that this was a nice piece over all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More longer scenes especially the action scenes

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[Universal Donor]

Very nice

Now this was something very good the story here really drove the element and made the story to strive for so very nice with that I do however think you could do some work on the animation it could be smoother and flow better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better flow of the animation could be better

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[Trees Freestylin']

Notbad

Well this one was notbad the tree oh the tree nice art though and some ok animation this was actually pretty creative and you bring a nice style. Some artsy style of happenings and overall a nice animation I was pretty impressed with your work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I didn't find anything wrong with this it stands alone on it's own creative styles so no need to change it or fix it

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[what rare candy does to your pokemon]

Wow

Congrats on the daily that was cool and I like how this has some good results the animation was very good and the narrative on this was pretty good and I thought you did very well on this there were some small skips on the audio

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some clean up on the audio or it could be on my end

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[My shitty show]

Notbad

Well I have to say this was very short but the characters are fantastic sharp looking and very crisp the voices are very good but I would ad subtitles just to have an extra feature you have some good talent but I would think about making these longer and into a long running series these characters really have something good and can go a long ways

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer make a series here and some subtitles would be great

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[Asteroids Tutorial]

So notbad

So I have to say even as old as this is it's still a pretty good piece of work it still helps in a way but it is outdated but still I find it to be some good work and hope you make some newer stuff sometime but anyways keep on doing what you do

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
An upgraded version would be a plus

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[HitTest Tutorial]

This was notbad

I like this because it does show an example of how to do it and I was impressed with the outcome of this and it's a decent tutorial and you made it work and I hope it helps others but anyways a decent effort in this one anyways keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It's fine as it is

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[I am the perfect one 2]

Cool

Well this was notbad I like this and it's older stuff like this that really make me enjoy this site for all it does your animation is very well done and I'm pretty impressed with this animation and how the story turned out you have done a very nice job on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make it longer and more into the story

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