XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NewbieScape 4 Members]

((( THIS WAS FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
I love your art work, allthough it could be abit better, this game/flash had funny voices, but i think it went well with the character, and such a funny character at that, nice work, hope to see more episodes soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well while the art was ok, maybe not so "THICK" on the outline of stuff like rocks and pillars, and maybe even giving the character some propper legs...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash of newbs on gaming, this is sure to give you a good laugh, keep em coming...

~X~

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[Horrible humanity]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok well this was funny, the loop is abit repeditive, and the flash itseld is very short and random, could use more to it even a story would be nice...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well making more to it like more scenes even some sound/fx which i didnt hear, but more reason why this guy is feeding him with his head haha...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short but random and strange flash, you have been warned anyone who doesnt like strange things, anyways funny clip...

~X~

[olaf]

((( HAHA GOOD STUFF )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this started out good and really good drawings then it turned to funny madness which i liked gives it a sorta twist, nice flash and good animating, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W

~~OVERALL~~
A good Black and white flash that will suprise you, nice work, hope to see more soon...

~X~

[Malheureux Short 1]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well you are right, it is short, very shot infact, but still had a sense of entertainment value, the cat was welldone and neatly animated, allthough there was not much animation, the short flash "LOOPED" you can fix that read below...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now it loops you can fix that You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash, also som more sound/FX wouldnt hurt, aswell as making more story to it...

~~OVERALL~~
A very very short cat flash but with a slight joke so maybe some will like it...

~X~

[The Robot: part I]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, and i must say you did put lots of good effort in this one, the characters, to the decent anumation, i do have a question, is that dog a pig/dog ?? haha, anyways good flash with good story...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I noticed the voices were abit low, maybe you could make em abit louder, and another idea might be to add some subtitles, it will help since they do talk abit low...

~~OVERALL~~
A good little animation with nice characters and a good storyline, cant wait for more...

~X~

[444]

((( NEEDS MORE EFFORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, really needed more, there was the one scene and basicly it ends with that, so not much to go on, the clocks were ok but could use more of them...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well its abit bland in backrounds, story and characters, needs abit more effort, and some sorta in depth story would help overall...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash of clocks but still not much to go on...

~X~

[L1F3 Shorts ep.27]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Nice work on this, i remember the other one i saw, and this one was ok but i like the one just before this one, but still funny stuff with good characters, nice flash, keep em up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i find the "VIEW SCREEN" abit small though, so making it somewhat larger might be better...

~~OVERALL~~
A great series of flash episodes, somewhat random but funny indeed...

~X~

[Starwell ep3: the JOB!]

((( AWSOME GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was great stuff, the graphics, alone was great, and you had some really nice animation to go with, very sponge bob matrix hehe, anyways really awsome work, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well this couldnt be improved much it was very impressive in every aspect, make more soon...

~~OVERALL~~
Simply some of the best characters around, i must see for all, keep em coming...

~X~

[Bitclock Interview]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent, but seemed really short, the art and graphics were decent, and the story well what was of a story was sorta funny but there really was not much to go on, needs more...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well making it longer with more scenes and more characters involved aswell, its a start though...

~~OVERALL~~
A short interview flash with some nice artwork, hope to see more soon...

~X~