XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Star Wars As It Should Be]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Its interesting, i like some of the funy quotes, but its ot much more then that, it made me laugh though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well you could make it the same size as your flash screen size, maybe even having some of your own aniamtions in the corner or even making an animationg of starwars...

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting quoets with starwars clips, interesting but not original...

~X~

[education sucks]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat kinda ran slow, but you did present it well with all the colors was cool, and was funny aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail in the backrounds, more effects and speed up the animation...

~~OVERALL~~

~X~

[Ires of the Dragon]

((( FUNNY ENDING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i liked this flash, it had a perfect ending, i do say the "CHARACTER" was very bland but had a uniquenes about him, and the whistle was funny, the dragon was cool and nice drawing of him, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well maybe make it abit longer, and more secenes with the dragon, i liked the blue sky but you could have some "CLOUDS" float by now and then...

~~OVERALL~~
A short but cute story of a dragon, made me laugh, nice flash, keep it up...

~X~

[Motion IPOD]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent, but could be better, it sorta hurt my eyes at first with the close up and far away images but sorta neat i supose, the color tone was different aswell, nice flash, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well you could add a few different colors for change, the "RED" text was hard to read maybe black would be better, and make some animated characters instead of short clips of people and stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A different sorta flash, abit bland and could use more effort, it was interesting though, keep it up...

~X~

[Little Fight!]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was entertainingm the "STICKS" did seem abit small though, and i have seen this style of flash, kinda neat, but it could use a different style to it, nice fight though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well the white backrounds were abit basic, maybe even adding some "COLOR" or even like brick walls, it would make it overall better...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun basic fight flash with tiny sticks, nice job its entertaining...

~X~

[Android X-19]

((( VERY SMOOTH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hey this was very smooth looking, the "SHINE" on the metal claws at the start was really neat, and this flash was very sleep and sharp and awsome job with smooth animation, you should make more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not much really its perfect as is, make more episodes though...

~~OVERALL~~
A very sharp and smooth animation, awsome graphics, must see by all...

~X~

Creative-Brain responds:

thank you ! and nah i don't like making series flashes.

[Intorelably Cute Violence]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This did make me chukkle abitm and i liked the B&W, and i liked that you added some red in there, seemed abit short though, still a cute funny short...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more clips, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see

~~OVERALL~~
A cute flash short of Black and white, could use more to it, but still an entertaining flash, nice short...

~X~

[Starwell ep4: Tired]

((( ANOTHER EPISODE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Funny, episode, abit short, but funny, and i love the characters even if they stand still most of the time, and some awsome voices behind them, maybe make them longer next time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer episode, more animation from the characters, and more different scenes aswell, i also noticed the flash just started playing and there was no "RE-PLAY" button at the end, nore "PLAY" button at the start, might want to add them propper buttons...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny episode, of yellow creatures, with some great voicing behind it, nice job...

~X~

[Hitler]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
It had a good start but then sorta just ended, you actually did a nice job on the "CHARACTER" but the flash almost seems unfished, but it looks like you have something there just needs more detail and effort...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters, more shading and detail on backrounds and the character...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny start to a promising flash...

~X~