XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cookie man]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm what to say, it was interesting, the "ART" does need some improving though, and more "SOUND/FX" wouldnt hurt either, good luck...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on the art and backrounds, add some sound.fx maybe even some backround music for an overall better effect...

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting flash, abit confusing but interesting could be improved, good luck...

~X~

[The Little Buzzers Ep 4]

((( AWSOME )))

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was good, and like the last guy said cute, i must admitt it was very cute, but also possesd, lots of good animation and smooth at that, i was very impressed, nice animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Filesize was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us us 56k.

~~OVERALL~~
A great little animation, funny characters and just overall was funny, nice work indeed...

~X~

[life of a puppet]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Needs some work, you do have the right idea, but its abit sloppy in some areas, more dtail for one and most of all more effort, nice animation though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lots of little things will actually improve on this, backround effects, character effects and more color...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash just needs more effort and time...

~X~

[Melon Ted]

((( LOVE THE SMOOTH ART )))

~~REVIEW~~
This had a great character very smooth looking graphics like the chatacter and even the backrounds, it was extremly short thoug, actually way too short to obsorb it all, great short though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer or improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see

~~OVERALL~~
A very short animation but shows lots of effort and love that character, it was sorta funny, nice job...

~X~

[just2pale Halloween]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda like a halloween card sorta, the characters were very impressive, showing lots of effort in detail from the hair to the animation in eyes, also great voicesing very realistic to the characters...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was abit short, add more scenes and more story to it, it will improve on the flash overall

~~OVERALL~~
A cute and funny flash somewhat short but still very good work...

~X~

[Daily2oon09162005]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually notbad, made me laugh on some of the clips, they were actually of good quality i was impressed, llthough the main menu was abit misleading, nice animations everyone...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A better menue with atleast some color, other then that it was reall good...

~~OVERALL~~
A parody i think but with more quality to it...

~X~

[Infestation: Part 1]

((( CONFUSING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm this was abit confusing, not sure what was going on but it did have some nice artwork and good use of color, just abit confusing and verys hort...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, give it some sort of story, and some sorta character base...

~~OVERALL~~
A very very short animation confusing but an animation at that, check itout sometime, if you dare...

~X~

[Joey's Story ep. 2]

((( COULD E IMPROVED )))

~~REVIEW~~
This could be improved. the animation wa sok actually kinda smooth, the volume seemed abit low though, and the backrounds were abit bland as were the characters aswell, its ok but can be better...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail like with the characters, eyes and mouths, and some backrounds would help more details showing more then just the lines...

~~OVERALL~~
A good animation but can be better with some detailing...

~X~

[Butlers]

((( MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Really nice job on the characters, mainly the hair, showed some good detail and effort, the characters looked funny with there skinny arms and all, the flash was really funny there voices did seem abit low but still funny stuff, nice animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i would suggest some "SUBTITLES" just incase the volume is lower for other users, will also help to understand whats being said better, also you could take the flash into other scenes maybe have them walk around the city or something...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash with some entertaining and strange characters, really nice animation...

~X~

[Blood Ravens Story]

((( DECENT FLASH )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a decent flash i was actually very into it, lots to see and has a certian style to it that i liked, very good work on the story very well done, i did wait abit of time before it loaded though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Download time 4megs was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us us 56k.

~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash with some good thought and effort behind it, but needs compressing badly...

~X~