XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[blockheads]

((( VERY GOOD SKETCHING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very impressive, i love the sketch drawings, the animating of them was actually notbad either, i love teh sketsches though it was abit different and had a unique style to it, it also playedout a sorta story, very nice job i would love to see this in a series...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more for sure, and maybe better animating i mean with more limbs animated, also some voices from the characters to give a sense of more of a story...

~~OVERALL~~
A great and unique flash, different and while it has no color it has a sense of style to it...

~X~

[Boredom is Bad]

((( NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was sorta funny, the "ARTWORK" was the best though from head to toe it had great shading and detail, and awsome animation, flowed very easy and smooth, i thought the "AUDIO" from dumb and dumber shouldnt have been used it just didnt look right...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe faster loading so you could cut here and there to give it a better loading time or something...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash, a familuar audio but over-used it, nice and funny flash though, you should make more soon...

~X~

LaserKarl responds:

Thanks man!
Many nice tips here :)

[bigg nosed man]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was just strange, but i must admitt it was funny, the "CHARACTERS" were funny and they talked funny and made it unique, abit strange though, still nice flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more characters and more depth in detail. the voices were good, but maybe change it up abit ...

~~OVERALL~~
A very strange flash with even more strange audio, but fits in with the odd looking characters...

~X~

[Umbrella: TSE]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This startedout to be a neat idea, but with just "JPEGS" and a button repetitve got abit anoying, the music was neat, the game does need work, more understanding of it aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well there are lots of things but the one thing that most bugs me was the "BUTTONS" instead of using butons to proceed to the next msg, just have it flow as a movie, viewers may get anoyed at always having to press the button...

~~OVERALL~~
A simple game but not much effort was put into it, also abit confusing, needs more work...

~X~

[Tom fights the Ninjas]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute, the voice helped with that, the idea of it in B/W was ok but could be worked on, the whole stick style was ok aswell but needs more detail like character like characters and some sorta backrounds, the voicing and story seemed to be the best part and playedout well...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs abit of more detail and effort in the character areas, And while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W

~~OVERALL~~
A good idea, but needs more effort and ideas, and color...

~X~

[Vacation Time]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but could use some work, more detail and more time into the flash, filesize was notbad but could be abit better, just a few things to work on...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort, more time with characters and giving a better flow of anumation, and more detail like in the backrounds it wouldnt hurt and would probably improve on the flash...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash but clearly needs abit of work, nice job...

~X~

[Vauxhall - It's a Shame]

((( GOOD MUSIC )))

~~REVIEW~~
This had some really good music, and the "ARTWORK" was even better, music was impressive and flowed well with the animating, a decent music video if you ask me, nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe have like a small camera screen showing a small animation of some action like of a video playing, or something...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent music video, with good music and decent animating...

~X~

[THIEF: Baffords Scepter]

((( VERY IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very impressive, the detail in the backrounds like the "FIRE TORCH" and the jpeg backrounds mixed with art work was an awsome idea, allthough the sticks could be better detailed, a very impressive flash though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on the sticks give them some detail some face features more animation and more ideas to bring them to life...

~~OVERALL~~
A great flash cant be missed, must see as it combines great ideas to make one awsome flash...

~X~

Manfreak responds:

Heh, did you notice how I took some of your suggestions and others here on board for my new thief animation? A whole 5 years later lol. Looking at your reviews I see you are a great critic. Thanks for your help here :D

[Tutorials 4 Flash (Beg.)]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well if it helps people then its a plus, this "TUTORIAL" seems like it was abit bugy, mainly with the preloader, its a good tut and if it can help new authers then it has done its job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe check on the preloader it seemed buggy and very laggy, a tutorial shouldnt be so big either...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent tutorial with a few bugs to workout...

~X~