XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Final Christmas]

Nice flick

So very nice work here on this holiday flick the voices are great the scripting is fabulous the animation is notbad but you did win some awards on this and that's a plus I do like what you presented here so nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it's fine as is

~X~

[Recommended]

Notbad

So notbad at all I found this film to be kind of entertaining gives some good insight on how things are with YouTube now I wouldn't mind some added humor in there and even much more animation it's not bad it just would be nice to have more. But I liked it and liked what you presented with it as it was so nice work here and look forward to even more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more humor maybe even more animation

~X~

artistunknown responds:

Yeah, there could definitely be some more animation in this, I was especially rushing with this one, but not in a good way. Going to be putting more effort in the future.

Thanks ;3

[Ground Game]

Nice flow

So this one had a nice flow of animation and some good artistic views well in my opinion of course but I really like it and as for improvments I would say extend this to be longer just a tad bit more it's a good style of animation you have

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make it longer if you can

~X~

[toothpaste]

Funny

So here with this one you put some humor into it and it creates a lot of energy behind it with a good funny vibe around it and it's a good idea on top of that so nice job there and I really liked what you have done here so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Couldn't find anything I would really change about this but it's cool work

~X~

[Yuki-chan 12 (The angry Yukino of video games)]

Cute

She was cute and angry and this was a fun flick to review with all the flow of animation it kind of really just came together and winning a daily fourth you can't go wrong there as this was a pretty good and intense film I wouldn't mind more splashy and flashy effects

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More splashy and flashy effects

~X~

[Sailor Mercury Animation - Mercury Power]

A loop

Well notbad for a 2017 loop and it was actually pretty smooth and it's kind of hard to review just a loop but it was pretty intense and had some good style about it all I can say is make it longer it's a good style though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #24]

You make this look easy

And you really do make this look easy with all the wild and crazy stuff sergio does the other characters and side stuff he does makes this pretty fun to watch, I am glad to rview these and while you have a lot of them and some things could be better its still a pretty nifty entry and series, And Lastly I think the submission Is fairly good, This was a nice Flash submission had some artistic value and some sense of humor, and keeps you interested aswell as entertained.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bring it some random characters.

~X~

[Audio Portal 4]

Interesting movie

Alright so this was an interesting movie here, kind of entertaining and some amusing characters and such, it was funny dont get me wrong but needs more plot to it, more point to it it was kind of funny though so not bad on the humor portion of this. anyways nice efforts here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer and more of a plot to the story.

~X~

[Unloved]

Decent

So the animation in this little movie is pretty decent but its just so very shor so if anything is suggested here today I am gonna go with making this more then a clip ad some longer motiones new scenes and just more stuff that the doll or character does maybe he walks thru town or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The doll needs to go more places not just the one scene, make this movie longer, more depth needed.

~X~

Enoll responds:

Thanks for the review my good man.
This animation served its' purpose to the depressed 15yo me working through emotions