XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bob - Palindromes]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, and i guess you made some changes to it, but like i said it was interesting and somewhat entertaining, and for your first few flashworks it was not that bad, could use more though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail is needed, more time on it, and you need to compress it somewhat, as best as you can...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash kinda different, but still interesting...

~X~

[Background Tut]

((( GOOD TUT IDEA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is interesting, i never thought anyone would need a tutorial, but i supose it can be handy, it was quick and short, not sure if thats good or bad, but if it helps then its a plus, so nice tutorial...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well you could add more tutorials instead of just the one, give it more depth and not just a single one...

~~OVERALL~~
A really good idea for a tutorial, the first of its kind i think, anyways nice job...

~X~

[The New Years Party 2]

((( GOOD IDEA )))

~~REVIEW~~
I like this for the idea behind it, it really had me going for awhile, but you presented it well, nice detail aswell, file downloading was abit much though, anyways nice flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Filesize that wa just crazy, remember lower is better so more people view it and dont have to wait so long...

~~OVERALL~~
A big file but good stuff, cant be missed, and some decent music within...

~X~

dookiemoole responds:

fuck i think i know why its huge. i gotta make the last song streamed cuz i think the last song is taking up like 95% of the space

[the shit]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha well it was neat, ya newgrounds has a few stickfights stick flashs are not the best, but this was ok lots of things going on, and the backrounds are ok but could be better...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail like you could give some to the sticks, make more like characters, and give it some more detail in a story like sense of it...

~~OVERALL~~
Another stick flash, this one actualy has some good points though, anyways nice flash...

~X~

[ArrowTime]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was an interesting story, you set it up good and plays out well, the backrounds were good i like what you did with the original then abit more in this one, a decent flash nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a series out of it how the guy continues to struggle or something

~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash, keeps the viewer interesting, nice animation...

~X~

RicPendragon responds:

Glad you liked it.
The closest thing to a series like this will be Sonic Chaos Z when I get the time to release it.
But rest assured, The totems are in Sonic Chaos Z Sprite comic, and Im just animating the issues

[CR intro]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting the file size was abit much for the amount of animation, and i wouldnt suggest putting it on every animation, for one its too big and would take away from the other flash, but for this flash it was ok, kinda interesting...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower its size, cute where you can its too big for what it is...

~~OVERALL~~
An intersting flash intro good animation but could be compressed, anyways nice intro...

~X~