XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wacky Senor Barajas]

((( UM OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm what can i saw, it "LOOPS" has no sound, no backrounds, just a silly character moving around, so i supose there was some effort, but it was just very plain...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Probably alot of things from detail to backrounds and music....

~~OVERALL~~
A simple dancing man, not much more then that...

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[Colin gets a surprise]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok i remember the "TRICKY" ERA i even made a dress-up myself, it was fun, this trick starts off right away which is funny and you gotta lov ethe song heh, anyways nice short...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nake it longer so that it doesnt trick till later...

~~OVERALL~~
Funn classic tricky the clown...

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[Another fbf]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well allthough i have seen alot of these same types with fbf with just lines, it was ok, could use some color, and some nice music aswell, but there is not much to go on, you could have added some color to the backrounds...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
On alot of FBF animations the animation is actually really good, but what these lack as all the others do is that the backrounds have no color, or the animation is just lines jumping around or going from side to side, and what they need is more detail graphics props not just the lines, aswell as good use of color...

~~OVERALL~~
Abit simple lacked color and needed something more then just lines back and fourth...

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[Bruce the Shitzu 1]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this made me laugh, very funny, i noticed the "CHARACTERS" had an odd look to them what program did you use to make them?? anyways funny jokes, especialy the mom one heh, and great characters, i like this, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would say just add some more jokes, it was funny but could use more...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and odd characters and some funny jokes, notbad at all...

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[Brotha Rap]

((( NEEDS A PRELOADER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was funny, and a nice "CHARACTER" with good use of color, but you needed some backrounds, and it did get abit anoying of the "LOOPING" you may want to fix that, but it was entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the looping, You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny dancing and some interesting music, does need some fixing for the loop though...

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[Bounty Hunter Zero Part 2]

((( ABIT SLOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was abit slow, the animation i mean, you did have some nice looking sprites but they moved really slow, and it was hard to read the small text, kinda funny though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the animation, and make the text abit bigger...

~~OVERALL~~
Sprites in action except its abit slow on this one...

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