XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Another fbf]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well allthough i have seen alot of these same types with fbf with just lines, it was ok, could use some color, and some nice music aswell, but there is not much to go on, you could have added some color to the backrounds...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
On alot of FBF animations the animation is actually really good, but what these lack as all the others do is that the backrounds have no color, or the animation is just lines jumping around or going from side to side, and what they need is more detail graphics props not just the lines, aswell as good use of color...

~~OVERALL~~
Abit simple lacked color and needed something more then just lines back and fourth...

~X~

[Bruce the Shitzu 1]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this made me laugh, very funny, i noticed the "CHARACTERS" had an odd look to them what program did you use to make them?? anyways funny jokes, especialy the mom one heh, and great characters, i like this, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would say just add some more jokes, it was funny but could use more...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and odd characters and some funny jokes, notbad at all...

~X~

[Brotha Rap]

((( NEEDS A PRELOADER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was funny, and a nice "CHARACTER" with good use of color, but you needed some backrounds, and it did get abit anoying of the "LOOPING" you may want to fix that, but it was entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the looping, You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny dancing and some interesting music, does need some fixing for the loop though...

~X~

[Bounty Hunter Zero Part 2]

((( ABIT SLOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was abit slow, the animation i mean, you did have some nice looking sprites but they moved really slow, and it was hard to read the small text, kinda funny though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the animation, and make the text abit bigger...

~~OVERALL~~
Sprites in action except its abit slow on this one...

~X~

[Battalion 7 - Episode 3]

((( VERY FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Great "VOIC-ACTING" it gave the film more quality, and really made
the story more fun and entertaining, also liked the different view shots, it was like a real movie, anyways great flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters would make it just right...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flash great story line,a nd good action...

~X~

[Blockhead: Episode 2]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok i guess i should have watched in order, but anyways sofar after watching the 2nd and 3rd i like the 3rd, but this still has some ok humor and the good characters as always, anyways nice work, cant wait to see more...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More humor could be worked on in this one...

~~OVERALL~~
Episode 2 of a great funny flash...

~X~

[Blockhead: Episode 3]

((( IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was imoressive, not sure if i remember the other ones but this was good, very high quality in my opinion, i just love the characters very well made and you gave it some good humor aswell, very nice work on this, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would say more humor but its already as funny as it can be...

~~OVERALL~~
All 10's because i loved the humor and it had good effort from start to finish, hope to see more soon...

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