XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pogo Lock's]

Random

So here was a random one, and it is ok because it does have a nice sound from the music and the animations was notbad eiether, it was kind of short though and you could have made this one a tad bit longer a few more characters here or there and a few more different scenes, but its a decent random animation. Before I get started on this review I would like to take this time and say that this was a decent flash entry and you have done alot to bring the fun and entertaining value to the table, so props to you for that, as for the rest it was all a good flash and I really enjoyed what you have presented here, glad to see you putting the effort fourth here. Now even though this is the end here, There are just a few fix ups it needs but so far you have a good piece of flash here, Both fun and entertaining and you added another twist along the way. and you added Attention to Detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could have made this one a tad bit longer a few more characters here or there and a few more different scenes.

~X~

AubergineLock responds:

I made this about 15 years ago but thanks i'll try and improve on it!

[Dirty Power - part 1]

Notbad

Alright so notbad here, this was pretty good the sprites were notbad the story was decent animation was ok but could be smoother, and you dont need that next dialog button, the movie itself has an ok story and was not too bad was bland at times, I liked it though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
animation was ok but could be smoother, thats about the onlything that could be cleaned up oh and remove the next dialog button its a hassle just clicking on it just allow this to flow like a movie.

~X~

[JJ's KFC Kid's Meal]

Nice

lol this was amusing Iremember when this happened it was great stuff and a great time, glad to see theres a movie about it makes it all that much better, onlything this is missing is some more flashy effects and such, but some nice job here its pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some flashy effects like splash effects and such.

~X~

[Stick Facts-Brief History]

Cute Animation

And here was a cute animation I like the stick figyres but you should give them more character designs and such, this was a nice idea you have here with the animation, you should make more of these as they are pretty good, so Kudos to you on this submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make them longer, ad more color and make more of these.

~X~

[-Apparide-]

Entertaining

Wow you went all out on this one and created something very simular to the originals so that was pretty good, great use of color on all this animation and characters aswell, so nice work indeed, here wish you would have made more of these its a great classic toon come to life on flash. An entertaining flash submission here I like the content you got going on with this one, its pretty interesting, and while its not the most perfectioned flash around i still thought it was pretty good, maybe later I will suggest some new ideas, but for now I think you did a good job on this one. I was Excitedly awaiting what would happen nexton this one. I Endorse this interesting flash So here in the end you have shined up the edges and made this shine with some flavor, this was a pleasure and I do hope you keep making stuff like this as it was a good effort so nice job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more in the series maybe of all the different characters.

~X~

[President TAFT]

Nice

Nice animation and the lesson here on history was good, the "VOLUME QAULITY" was kinda low and was kind of hard to understand but its good you had some subtitles, artwork was simple maybe adding some shades in detail in the props like desks backrounds walls etc.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more texture and meshing detail in the artwork itself. and the volume quality could be cleaned up it was groggy.

~X~

[Level Up Movie]

Cool

This would have been a great congrats form for all who level up in the forums haha, but anyways you did well on this added some nice animation and music was great all those old icons are fun to see around and all, very nice job here keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not really anything since this was pretty good as is, a top notch film.

~X~

[DP 5 - The missing fight]

Nice

The sound didnt kick in till later so maybe thats something that can be cleaned up at a later date, there was some good scenes in here and its always fun with sprites and such a good flash here if you ask me and I did enjoy this just needs work on the sound.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the sound and music kick in a lot sooner

~X~

[How not to rob a bank]

Interesting flick

Theres a few things you could do to make this better now dont get me wrong I like this, but the next scene button is not needed just let it flow from scene to scene like a real movie might flow forward, also more detail in your characters stick only is ok but could be better. overall a nice flick here. This was one great Discovery of some interesting ideas and an even better concept as it all plays out, I really like what you do and what you have done here, And so an entertaining experience we have come up with here, there are some things that you could do to make it better but I will leave that for later, but for the mostpart I was entertained with your movie entry here. You are a great Visionary of flash and it shows with this submission, Glad I had the Opportunity to check this one out today It was a fantastic piece and nice vibe behind it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the next scene button is not needed just let it flow from scene to scene like a real movie might flow forward, better designed characters also needed.

~X~

[TurdClock's Journey Pt. 2]

Good story

The clocks and there silly voicees lol, you presented a good story here with a sort of plot and you made it funny and amusing, this flash film does need some "SUBTITLES" though mainly for the clocks robotic voice lol, but it was an entertaining little flash you had here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some subtitles would be a huge upgrade here.

~X~