XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[oh, Jesus.]

((( WELL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well it was ok but needs much more then what you have there, just too little and too

large in file for the content, also the topic matter was abit iffy, just not enough time

went into this, better luck next time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well make it longer, and more humor more jokes, just something to make the viewers intersted in it...

~~OVERALL~~
It lacks detail time and effort, but is a start in the right direction, keep at it...

~X~

[Reiko - Blocks Brat]

((( VERY NICE DRAWINGS )))

~~REVIEW~~
I was more impressed with the "DETAIL" and actual drawings of the characters then the

acyaual flash, besides you could totaly see the outcome coming of the story, but very

welldone work on detail such as the detail in the wooden blocks or the girls hair and such,

the characters lacked animating such as limbs and so on, but overall a very good flash, and

cute joke...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Animate the characters better like arms, eyes legs, fingers and even waving of the hair...

~~OVERALL~~
A great drawing detail, cute joke, but lacks in more animating...

~X~

TaintedInk responds:

17,310 reviews? Sheesh, you need a more productive hobby. guy.

[SaintStick]

((( STICKS HMMMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well cant say i know of the characters or show they came from but you did an ok job even if

it was sticks, but i would suggest getting away from that and into some real characters, i

did however like the "MUSIC" and the action was notbad either, nice work indeed, hope to see

more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More refined characters, sticks are ok but the quality will show from real characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat flash some decent action, and good music...

~X~

[The sweetie shop]

((( LOL BRILIANT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha man i was not expecting this to be that good at first i saw the "GRAPHICS" and was like wtf, but as i got into it the story made up for it, allthugh it was abit short you really put effort to make it good, i supose the simple characters work with a brilliant idea and some decen "VOICING" to go along with, so props to you on a very welldone flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and make more episodes like different things happening to different people...

~~OVERALL~~
This lacks in art, but proves worthy in story and sound/fx, a must see by all flash fans...

~X~

[Sad knights]

((( TOO SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was just way to short seems like it would go better in a colab of some sort, just not by itself, as for the flash it was funny kinda hard to understand what was being said so maybe some subtitles, funny stuff though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was abit hard to understand what was being said by the characters, so i would suggest adding some "SUBTITLES" to know exactly what the dialog is, it will improve on the flash, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short short, funny but short...

~X~

[Scarecrow]

((( VERY IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very impressive, so for that you get all 10's from me, and congrats on the daily 4rt i cans ee why you got it so nice job there, anyways it was really good from the smooth animating to the sharp looking art detail very well done...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing it was perfect...

~~OVERALL~~
A great animation very sharp looking...

~X~

[Shit Happens...]

((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad animation, its just ok, needs more to it more art detail like on the characters, and i would even go as far as to changing the music that just wasnent fitting right with me, also more effects in the backrounds would be neat, anyways good luck...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better music, more detail, and longer if you can...

~~OVERALL~~
A short animation but needs more effort and work...

~X~

[The Pygmy Shrew]

((( NEAT STUFF )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, some really good voicing seem to fit perfect for the content ha a schrew hehe, some nice animation aswell as anamal designs very good work on this, also neat how there was 3 different viewings on the matter, anyways nice job, hope to see more in the near future...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it as is...

~~OVERALL~~
Ha this was neat and some really nice artwork to go with...

~X~