XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pmation: "Muscle Madness"]

Very good

Abother very good episode here from a nice adventure of an animation that runs so smooth and is some funny characters and creazy antics. The Discovery hete was Wonderfully done with some unique and random Material that in my opinion has made it a Victory, now ofcourse some parts could be smoothed out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more color into this one would be pretty good of an idea.

~X~

[Pmation: "Hot or Not"]

Here we are

Here we are with another fine piece nice flow of animation and the animation has a sort of story, So with the flash just getting started I Really like the touch you gave it and while I say that there is still some room for improvments, a little bit and Ill discuss that more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should do some of these on colored paper

~X~

[Fatal Portrait]

I like it

Alright so all the stuff you put in this movie reminds me of a good party because you have hosted something interesting and fun, Kind of like a party in the portal and you keep people happy through out, So onto more of the flash now. So now for the film really good animation and love all the different view shots even, you really put some energy into this and good character and story.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not really anything it was pretty brilliant.

~X~

[Assassination foiled]

Dedication

Dedication is key in all flash films or other flash works, and will make a good Victory you have Morphed some simple concepts and ideas into some more advanced options, So my Opening Remarks are just that, this is a good start. Very good 3-d style here but this should have been much longer and you should stop the loop also

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure if this was done in flash but if it was a stop action code would work for the looping if not try and have it end at the end, or something.

~X~

Hidden-Maverick responds:

It's way too advanced to be animated in flash, but yeah.

Thanks anyways!

[Messy Ricky's]

Nice

So visiting the portal is like going to a big casino there are somany slot machines and tables, somany shiny and interesting sounds, And so when I find something like this in the portal it puts a smile on my face because its like I am back in the casino once again. This was entertaining the "VOICE" work was pretty good, I wouldnt mind some subtitles and maybe make this one a bit longer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind some subtitles and maybe make this one a bit longer

~X~

[Exorcist and Demon]

Nice work

Now this was a Refreshing entry and a good Attempt of randomness aswell as bringing a good concept fourth, its a Victory in my book and I like the overused ideas that are enhanced. I like how you started this, your art work is well detailed and this was a fast paced film really good ending too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a series out of these characters.

~X~

Padrian responds:

Thank you for the review! Making a series out of these guys would be really awesome ^^

[the big fight]

That was short

So that was kind of short but was also entertaining, the characters could use some "POLISH" and improved animation more flow of animation with limbs and such, but it was a nice animation, This is the most refreshing hands down flash of the day that I have seen today, And I really like the direction you have started with this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
improved animation more flow of animation with limbs and such, and some improved detail on the characters.

~X~

[The Original Good Hu Boat Commercial]

Cute

This was cute I like the black and white style you have here, and the "SONG" was notbad either a good little short here, So I got some good Entertainment out of this and Surprisingly your Dedication does show thru well on this one, the effort is showing the time and work put in, So I am pleased with how this starts out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make more of these and put them together.

~X~

GruntVonVeizatun responds:

Thanks! This was actually based on a real commercial hence why it was so short. Also this was pretty much hand drawn and I mainly focus on puppetry. But I do want to try and make longer animations. Thank you for the constructive criticism. :)

[Therapy Dog - 8 - Small Talk]

Nice

As always nice work, your character work is great and this was pretty funny, so nice job with that, Now this is the type of flash that someone could fall head over heels with, not saying I have but this was something different and I like the style this flash has been heading in, there was some interesting creativity through out this flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was fine as is.

~X~