cool
So my Opening Remarks you seem to have Executed things pretty good, The fun and black and white is a nice touch I think some added color would be a nice element, Now this sort of reminds of lots of people gathering for a big event of some type, And they want to see what you offer them but you have shown them some good effort. And I was pleased to see this it had some nice elements and visuals. So at the end of the day when everything is said and done, you are good to go with the product you have presented.
~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
as suggested
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