XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sad knights]

((( TOO SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was just way to short seems like it would go better in a colab of some sort, just not by itself, as for the flash it was funny kinda hard to understand what was being said so maybe some subtitles, funny stuff though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was abit hard to understand what was being said by the characters, so i would suggest adding some "SUBTITLES" to know exactly what the dialog is, it will improve on the flash, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short short, funny but short...

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[Scarecrow]

((( VERY IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very impressive, so for that you get all 10's from me, and congrats on the daily 4rt i cans ee why you got it so nice job there, anyways it was really good from the smooth animating to the sharp looking art detail very well done...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing it was perfect...

~~OVERALL~~
A great animation very sharp looking...

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[Shit Happens...]

((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad animation, its just ok, needs more to it more art detail like on the characters, and i would even go as far as to changing the music that just wasnent fitting right with me, also more effects in the backrounds would be neat, anyways good luck...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better music, more detail, and longer if you can...

~~OVERALL~~
A short animation but needs more effort and work...

~X~

[The Pygmy Shrew]

((( NEAT STUFF )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, some really good voicing seem to fit perfect for the content ha a schrew hehe, some nice animation aswell as anamal designs very good work on this, also neat how there was 3 different viewings on the matter, anyways nice job, hope to see more in the near future...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it as is...

~~OVERALL~~
Ha this was neat and some really nice artwork to go with...

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[Totally Madness]

((( NEEDS MUCH MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
WEll if it was a test of some sort you could have put it on a free web host site or something, but it was way to short and right when it was getting good i mean it was smoother then most good action. besides the sticks it was really neat just needs more of a story or plot and not something that ends 4 seconds into it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and work on some character designs sticks are just um.... well you know...

~~OVERALL~~
A short but very smooth stick scene or something lol...

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Zielak responds:

thx, now go wach FULL version ;)

[people vs zombies part2]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, but needs more to it, maybe some detail some effects and just little things here and there to give it that extra something that makes flash avg to awsome...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the filesize somewhat it was dragging...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash but needs more detail and some compressing...

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[Lethal Personality]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i liked, kinda reminds me of all them DBZ flash that comes through the portal, very neat, the characters were drawn well, and the animation was decent, even had some nice backrounds, nice job, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more "STORY" and more characters...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat flash with some good characters good backrounds, nice work keep it up...

~X~

[SwitchBladeTalk: Patriots]

((( HMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Seemed abit slow if you ask me but i really did like the "ART" like the "SHADING" in the backrounds, some effects with the clock himself could make it much better, but it was ok, i liked it mostly for the artwork...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed it up somewhat...

~~OVERALL~~
Nice artwork and slow animation but still a neat little flash...

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SwitchBladeClock responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[Creation & Simplicity]

((( CUTE AND SIMPLE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute and simple, i like the "BLACK AND WHITE" of it all, but abit of colr would have been nice, the stick was neat he seemed to fit well with the scenery, i like dthe flash nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W...

~~OVERALL~~
A cute and simple flash. needs abit of color though...

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[Pancakes]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well that was abit short, i mean really short, also lacked in "BACKROUNDS" the gry backing was just abit plain, the "CHARACTERS" were really good though, and you also might want to add some color for extra quality to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color, some backrounds and make it longer then 4 seconds...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short almost black and white toon needs some improving...

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