XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Totally Madness]

((( NEEDS MUCH MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
WEll if it was a test of some sort you could have put it on a free web host site or something, but it was way to short and right when it was getting good i mean it was smoother then most good action. besides the sticks it was really neat just needs more of a story or plot and not something that ends 4 seconds into it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and work on some character designs sticks are just um.... well you know...

~~OVERALL~~
A short but very smooth stick scene or something lol...

~X~

Zielak responds:

thx, now go wach FULL version ;)

[people vs zombies part2]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, but needs more to it, maybe some detail some effects and just little things here and there to give it that extra something that makes flash avg to awsome...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the filesize somewhat it was dragging...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash but needs more detail and some compressing...

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[Lethal Personality]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i liked, kinda reminds me of all them DBZ flash that comes through the portal, very neat, the characters were drawn well, and the animation was decent, even had some nice backrounds, nice job, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more "STORY" and more characters...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat flash with some good characters good backrounds, nice work keep it up...

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[SwitchBladeTalk: Patriots]

((( HMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Seemed abit slow if you ask me but i really did like the "ART" like the "SHADING" in the backrounds, some effects with the clock himself could make it much better, but it was ok, i liked it mostly for the artwork...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed it up somewhat...

~~OVERALL~~
Nice artwork and slow animation but still a neat little flash...

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SwitchBladeClock responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[Creation & Simplicity]

((( CUTE AND SIMPLE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute and simple, i like the "BLACK AND WHITE" of it all, but abit of colr would have been nice, the stick was neat he seemed to fit well with the scenery, i like dthe flash nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W...

~~OVERALL~~
A cute and simple flash. needs abit of color though...

~X~

[Pancakes]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well that was abit short, i mean really short, also lacked in "BACKROUNDS" the gry backing was just abit plain, the "CHARACTERS" were really good though, and you also might want to add some color for extra quality to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color, some backrounds and make it longer then 4 seconds...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short almost black and white toon needs some improving...

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[Thromdimbulator]

((( CUTE AND SILLY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was good, abit silly and somewhat cute with the professor and all hehe, love the use of color as there was lots of it and good flowing smooth animating aswell nice job on this, i hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
hmmm add some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
Silly toon with lots of color and animation...

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[Madness Parody!]

((( INTERESTING ENDING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was another madness thing untill i saw the whole "LOVE" theme haha i really liked that it makes it somewhat different from just all the fighting and all, nice flash i was entertained hehe...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color just for different style...

~~OVERALL~~
Madness with a twist of love...

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