XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[French Canadian Senator]

((( SILLY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was amusing and funny, the "ART" was abit sloppy like the characters, the music was good for the style of art though, the "TEXT" was abit bland might want to improve in thinsg and more effort it did make me laugh though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I noticed the text was abit sloppy, why not give it some detail aswell as some Text bubbles, a decent font with some deep colors and good text bubles should improve on this... add some more detail to the art and characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny silly characters and song, its an entertaining and amusing flash...

~X~

[Robust & Dog II]

((( I LIKE THIS )))

~~REVIEW~~
I like this, eventhough it was dark all the way through it was neat, maybe to improve add a backing to the "TEXT" sorta like a text bubble to read off better, but as for the flash itself it was neat, i hope you cintibue it into more episodes and such, anyways good animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some text bubbles like a backing for the text you already have...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat dark flash has style to it...

~X~

Extar responds:

Glad you enjoyed this one more as I did try to step things up quality-wise on this one.
A backing to the text or higher contrast text could be a possibility, but no bubbles or arrows pointing to how is talking etc.
Well done for not being like 90% of the other reviewers and moaning about the darkness like a pussy.
There's a good chance there will be more of this.

[Anarchy Face 17: S.C.I]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Not sure if i seen the others but i supose i will after this, it was an entertaininga nd interesting flash it did get abit confusing at first but soon understood it, could use more graphics detail and some compressing of the file, but for the mostpart it was entertaining and fun...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file as much as you can, and add more detail and effects...

~~OVERALL~~
Inteeresting flash and abit confusing at first but funny and entertaining...

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Destroya responds:

I'm starting o think your a fan now.

[Killer Killer!!!]

((( THIS WAS DIFFERENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat abit different, good animation with the running, very smooth, and some nice characters, maybe add some more color though, and the "MUSIC" was just right for this, anyways good animation, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color would be cool...

~~OVERALL~~
A very entertaining animation, good smooth animation and neat plot, great work...

~X~

[chaos emeralds day v2]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat kinda "LOCKS + SONIC" it was neat, the animations seemed abit slow, and it was hard to hear what was being said even in the music, so i would suggest some subtitles, but as for the flash it was entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better animation, some more detail in the characters would be cool, and some subtitles would also help...

~~OVERALL~~
Sonic and locks make an interesting flash, it was neat though...

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[All Madness]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well it was interesting, some basic sticks and some wild music, it all worked out ok though good kills. allthough i would have picked some different music, maybe some character work on the sticks, anyways nice animation, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better sticks with details like in the face and so-on...

~~OVERALL~~
Good actiion and deaths, and wild music, what more could you expect from a stick flash ha...

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[Bob, the Fish]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but needs work, for one it loops, an dthe sound if any was very low could barely hear it, you have a good idea here with the fish but just needs more to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, add more scenes, and You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash, also needs better "SOUND" quality...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea for a flash good character, but needs more effort...

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