XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness WhiteHank Collab]

Nice

Well this was pretty good of a film I like the blood, And do think you actually do need more blood like on the ground and dripping and flying all around that would be a nice effect, But now I just wanted to comment on how I preceived this to start off, and sofar I am pretty intriged by it, so glad to see something good here. Perhaps some little stuff here and there can be tweaked, And there is room for some various ideas of improving on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
do think you actually do need more blood like on the ground and dripping and flying all around that would be a nice effect

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Kenamy responds:

Actually i'm pretty sure i added it on my part, guess it's just gone lol. but i usually adds some, sorry about that.

[Orange Combat: Halloween day (Part 1)]

Entertaining

Well this was a really really short one but it was still pretty entertaining, the characters are ok but could be more rfined and detailed. The animation could have more "PLOT" and dialog to it, more depth in the story, but overall it was a short little film that was entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the characters are ok but could be more rfined and detailed. more plot to the story more dialog too.

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[Birdbath 3: The Legend of Fishquatch]

Notbad

Well this was pretty good animation you have here I wouldnt mind some improvement on the birds like more texture and more feathers and such, the voice work here is pretty impressive, and this was a cute little animation you have here, kind of cute even, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More polish and detail on the birds.

~X~

[GMSU 05-17-18]

Amusing

This was pretty amusing Good voice work on this and you made it funny and made it work well, the art was decent and the topics of choice are pretty amusing, some raunchy stuff but thats what made it amusing, overall this was an amusing little animation you have hope you make more like this one here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these like in a series of such.

~X~

[How It Feels To Chew 5 Gum]

wow

That was really cool, For your first works in animation thats some really welldone animation even as short as it was, but still entertaining and the "VOICE" work is pretty good very good quality here just wish this was longer are you planning on transittioning your comic in to animation? that would be pretty nifty, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything I can see you changing would be make it longer or ad other short animations with this.

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[Rap Battle: Ryu vs Ken - Starbomb]

This was different

Well I will say is that this was kind of differnt, the idea is great and really like it because its like a video of some sort, the graphics are notbad and its a good piece and good flow of animation, very nice video you have here hope to see more soon someday anyways untill next time keep it real.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these.

~X~

[THE DOG THAT DROVE A CAR - Official Trailer (2018)]

Nice idea

So this was cool I like the idea you have on this one its pretty entertaining you have a good flavor of style here the trailer was a tad bit short but thats ok as it was a trailer, I cant wait to see a full version of this oneday so good stuff here very nice work indeed, I look forward to even more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not really anything but its a nice trailer.

~X~

[Dads A Cuck]

Notbad

So this was notbad the music was cool and seems to fit well, I did think this was a tad short so one idea would be to be a tad bit longer but your character work is pretty amazing and stylish and the toon itself was plesent just wish it was longer, anyways nice work here, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this one longer.

~X~

meatcanyon responds:

I really appreciate your critical feedback. I will definetly look into making longer pieces in the future! Thanks for watching l!

[Samurai Jack Animated Music video | In True Style by Wantaways]

Wow

Impressive this is really amazing work it really is like a video and the music really drives the animation and fits on every corner it passes, the animation is very smooth indeed, I was Excitedly entertained with this one, And I would certainly Recommend this one to others with simular interest. overall a decent flash. and was glad to have come across this find. anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing what so ever as this was a beautiful video.

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[hey bro]

lol

Well what Can I say about this it was very amusing and very entertaining, really really short though this was funny and gave me a good laugh and such you really made for some good humor but again this was just a very short animation and I could see you doing more with it maybe new scenes and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well for sure needs more animation, more scenes more flow of this so it flows like an animation but you still have a nice idea here, So while you do have an entertaining short here it seems too short, maybe havving some other shorts along with it, or make the existing one longer with much more depth. give it a try it cant hurt and im pretty sure your fans will enjoy it alot more. just something to think about.

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alecgrosso responds:

Thanks for the advice :) I agree it is too short. There hasn't been much of a response to this video until I uploaded it to NG. So fleshing out / making a sequel for these guys may happen after all