((( INTERESTING IDEA )))
~~REVIEW~~
Its a nice idea of the them and all, but not alot of people understand that i did think the "SIZE" was about 1 meg much, i did however like the story part, but the "ART" could use some details about them, but notbad sofar of what you have...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The size needs work, and more detail on the characters...
~~OVERALL~~
A good isea just needs more detail effort...
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