XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CSG 2]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok, kinda like a small trailer, the sprites are ok but they are oo random, and some of them are not even properly cut and all, the backrounds well they were very bland, i hope the next one is abit better....

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better cut sprites, better presentation, Im not the greatest fan of sprites, but this was an ok flash, i wouldnt mind seeing some real art in there though, sprites are cool but they do seem like the easy style of just plopping down and so-on, a mixture of sprites and flash art would make in different and not just the sprite way...

~~OVERALL~~
Sprite action but could use some cleaning up from the start to finish, also needs better presentation...

~X~

Smon responds:

~~I like doing this too. :P~~
Sprites are my forte', what can I say, though I'm working on a drawn animation called Dracula's Testicles (nothing you say could ever be even close to what the cartoon is.) so keep an eye out for that!

[36-24-36 (Villian Battle)]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, i like the "TWO" characters good detail and lots of effort shown, as for the sprite ones ha that was the funny part i though, its not a bad fladh at all, hope to see more of your work sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe longer and more episodes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flash with some good character designs...
~X~

[Perception Shorts #1]

((( STRANGE BUT NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This had a strange but very cool feel to it, also reminded me of those strange twilight films, the pulling of the face was neat, and flickering back and fourth was cool, it was all just neat to me, you should make more like this some of ypur best stuff if you ask me, anyways great job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer, more scenes, but make more episodes for sure...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange and neat flash, everyone should love this one...

~X~

[And the Hero Will Drown]

((( I LIKED IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This had a good plot, you really have something with it, you should make more to it like say in a series or something, it has lots of good points and really kept me interested, anyways nice animation, hope to see more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More episodes please...

~~OVERALL~~
Great story based, decent animation...

~X~

[Random Pointless Battle 3]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Funny, and good battle, allthough would have been nice to seen it move into other scenes and even have other characters come into the fight, some better colors and shades of detal could be worked with the characters, but overall it was a fun little battle...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better characters, more scenes and more characters could help to improve on this...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun little battle with a coupld of simple characters...

~X~

TheAmateurAnimator responds:

Better characters: I've been working on improving the character designs, but I've been too busy spending my summer being lazy to actually make a start on any animations.

More scenes: That's a very good idea.

More characters: I'm thinking of maybe a Blue Man Group cameo for episode 5...

Thanks for the review!

[Metal Gear: Very Easy]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, it was abit short though, you should have added lots of little funny clips for it, and even some "SUBTITLES" would have made it more better aswell, anyways funny short, good voices...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, and all-though the voices were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny parody, abit short though...

~X~

[Mecha]

((( WOW GREAT ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was a great animation, the "EFFECTS" alone were very neat and dazling and really gave it that whole "SCI-FI" effect and like there really was a war going on, the robot at the start was great aswell, awsome flash, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More stuff like this would be awsome...

~~OVERALL~~
Great sci-fi animation, very intense effects...

~X~

[Lil Dev Episode 2]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute i think i remember seeing one of these before, but anyways i love all the use of color, you should make the outer lines less thick though, anyways funny flash good color...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the lines less thick...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and good use of color...

~X~

[Don Crandler Action Hero]

((( STRANGE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was abit strange, especialy with the odd music and randon images but it worked well for the strangeness and made it even better and more interesting, allthough it seemed abit short it was a neat flash, make more of this and others like it sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer flash and more story wise...

~~OVERALL~~
A strange flash with a creepy feel...

~X~