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[Behemols Universe]

Differant kind of game here

I'll have to review this in a different way, But not too different, but because of the fact that it was well-made very well-made if you ask me and ofcourse there are some things you could have done differant, i will get to that though you do have a decent and unique of flash here. This was one of those differantkind of games, allthough it was something unique, the "MUSIC" was absolutly beatiful and these types of games make the music standout aswell, so i was kind of impressed with the music alone, the "GAME-CONTROLS" were notbad, smooth and fresh, but overall a fun game and delightfull. maybe adding some sortof color wouldnt hurt on this piece. Good Ideas fuel great flash of works like this one. Soon that note keep up the entertaining and detailed work that you do, and i really do look forward to more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Sometimes you have to take risks and do something differant, and if you can pull that off, You will have some amazing results, so here are some new things to try out. So the onlything i could think of to make this better or even slightly improved would be to add a touch of "COLOR" maybe certain key notes or enemeies or even some parts of the backround could have a touch of color here and there.

[BG Bronze Edition I]

great game

I absolutely love this submission, with the way that you've captured the elements and pushed even more ideas and such. So for me you have impressed, there may be some other ideas later but sofar you have impressed me and others im sure. Kind of big file size but guess it was all sort of worth it, there was alot of medals too so that was another plus to the game, so nice efforts there aswell, Having the intro was kind of nifty aswell. Alright this is a fun game but you should give some ideas on "CONTROLS" like for each level or just in the menu screen, also there are times when the cursur is invisble so not sure if it was a glich or not. So while this was a silly game i still found it to be funny and amusing. A diamond in the rough. Thats what i would call this, you dont find too many but once in awhile you will like i have here, so nice effort on that you have shown the skills.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There is alot of popularity Surrounding this piece and i can see why, There seems to be alot of decent work here, Eventually you could make this better, So i will Mention a few ideas Some things need to be smootherlike the disapearing curser, and a controlssection how to play on the menu screen would be another plus. Also on each game scene you should have a menu or replay that level options it would help to make for a more fun experience instead of the repettitivnes.

[Benny's Adventure]

Kinda hard to handle

The quality of the video is first rate, as is the style, with incredible design, plus everything moves independently, unlike the bulk of the flash that we usually see here. Lavish attention to detail, This was an ok game and you had some nice "MUSIC" to go with it so i was sort of impressed with that aspect of things, I had a real hard time figguring out the "CONTROLS" and such you didnt even have an "INSTRUCTIONS" section on this whole piece wich would have been nice, but it seems like a fun game, kind of interesting though, hope to see some improvments. I love how this all mixes together in a rare blend of ideas concepts. and thats what you need to make something special, and so this one caught my attention right away.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The best designers try new things, and new ideas,which usually result in award winning product, So try a few new things and new ideas that will push the limits, i have a few for you here. Add an instructiones section on how to ram doors and such, other then that this was notbad.

[Animal Creator]

Very unique

I found no Lackluster points, if there are any points thatneed some work, i will suggest some ideas abit later, There was some cluttered points, But it was a Divine piece of work, and i know you are capable of making this work to even a Professional manner wich its pretty much there, So let this shine and Thrive, into new ideas and fun times. Ok so this was a very unique game you have here, it has some very interesting and unique elements and you can really "CREATE" with this one, however it is lacking some "MUSIC" options but you have done well with giving the user some creativity value and design so nice work there, but i would try and add some music or some music options. Its not everyday i get to see alot of games like this but this particular one was alright, so anyways decent flash, some ok entertainment value, and it was presented well enough to understand it all so nice job here. but overall this was a pretty good game, not too much to add, except adding more to it but not by much, but great flash i really enjoyed it, These flash types and styles can take time. So on an ending note great effort and keep up with the ideas and such, i look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright so here is where i can suggest some new ideas and options and here is what i came up with this particular flash. This could use some music options, more stuff that will give some options to sounds and such.

[400 Chickens(In Potentia)]

Basic

This is a Groovy and Swanky submission, theres no need to be Negitive on anything infact i can only be Positive as you have this Loaded with fun-ness and a good sense of entertainment aswell as giving it some decent quality and entertainment value, So as i continue to review this i get more excited with each new thing and such. And here we have something basic i like the idea of "CHICKENS" but you didnt put enough effort with more selection and props, there was just a few options and thats what killed it, Some backrounds would be nice thats an option you didnt have either, But i do like the idea here, seems like it would be better with some more detail and more options, but overall notbad at all. but anyways decent work here just wish it had more features and options. I thought this was kind of Dazzling and something differant but for sure had a nice visual look to it with a sense of fresh look about it, this was a pretty decent game entry, Now even with that said there are some stuff on this submission that can be better fixed and spiced up, but thats for later or i may have stated what needs changes already.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Tweak A few things here and there, and this can be even better, It would be in your best interest and the people who play your game toput that extra effort and add more stuff with some nifty features options and even new ideas, not to take away anything from what you have going on but it could make for a better outcome of your flash game, so try a few things add more effort and let it flow. So as above, this could be better. and here are some suggestions, tips and ideas that can only help to make your idea work even better then it is, so give it a thought. So first off Add more items then Some backrounds, And Maybe you should have had small and thinner lines the brush strokes were too thick

[8-Bit Mario dress-up]

Cute and basic

A fun game here, it does need more of an ump to it, The fun level kind of drops out of it after abit so you need to do something with this to make it more exciting but from what i did play it was kinda fun, and seems more on the simple side of things but i still had some fun with this game, but anyways ill get into more detail about what it needs and doesnt need. With this dress up i thought it was kind of cute, but also still on the basic side of things, now i refer to it as basic because, the items were far and few inbetween, and there was no real unique or random items,also with dress-ups its bette to have a larger view screen and so on, Now on the "POSITIVE" note with this one i thought that you did something nifty with the "TEXT" bubble that really made things somewhat differant, but was just not enough, but anyways i still had some fun with this. But with all that said, Amusing game some decent interactivity, and fun to play, there was alot to see and it was overall fun so great job all around below i have left a few ideas that may help to Improve on this flash, so keep up the good work and i look forward to more. But anyways decent flash i had fun with them, and most of all keep up the fantastic flash work. And keep making these games they bring entertainment to all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And this was Genuinely a Decent game, it had some decent visuals some fun play about it, But Perhaps Some more Ironing out of some small little stuff, that could have some detailed effort and more unique stuff aswell, but there are some other improvments that could take place with this submission aswell so these are things to think about, and theres other stuff but these are some basic ideas and tips to work on A larger canvus would be a big start, and another big plus would be some backrounds then ofcourse more items, and animated items would also be something i would suggest.

[Cartman FUN]

A better dress up here.

I thought it was weird But i also found myself enjoying this entry as much as the next guy, so i got a positive feel from this so props to you for a decent submission. You have Distributed a very good entry here, This is Loaded with lots to see and do, This is a very Acceptable Flash, and would love to see it Thrive into even more. So i gave this particular dress-up a better score then most and that was because you did take the time to push forward some good ideas and some nice features aswell, there was some bland areas that could be reworked or added some new ideas and all, I think my most issues was that the "BUTTONS" were too small maybe you can make some larger buttons somehow. slso the items were plenty and there was lots of it, but you should also add more differant styles especially with the "HAIR" these are just some ideas that can improve and make this a much better game entry. So not to make the review too long I will end it here shortly So with this flash it was actually pretty good, I liked the effort you put forward on this but there are still a few more things here and there that could make it even better, now ofcourse there was some improvments that could make it much better i suggested some ideas below, but for what it is you presented a good flash with an entertaining and replay value, So good luck on anything else you have planned.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
What does need some work is some various ideas and basic fixes, they may be small edits to the game but they will do some wonders in making the game have much more quality to it, allowing for more fun of a game. well i may have a few or just one or two ideas and opinions that could help and improve on this, so dont take them too lightly as they are there to help you. make the buttons larger,You can add more scene like backrounds not just the color based ones.

[Animated Dress Up Game]

Another cool dress-up game you have here.

Now as i get into this game entry and review alot of things come to mind, some ill suggest some thoughts and ideas later in the review, but i must say that i was pretty impressed with what you did have and some effort does show in this and its the effort you put into it inwich i liked, So it does have potential to be even better in the future with updates and such. Alright so not a bad game here for being a dress up and all, the "SIZE" was notbad eiether all though it was slightly larger then most but i guess that all depends on the game, i think you have done a superb job though, I must say i was pretty impressed with this piece as you have added some interesting stuff that make it all complete, i really like the click and add on prop that was nice, you added alot of stuff, but maybe adding some more creative items and such would be a plus. anyways good game you have here. SO you have a Good game here, It was a pretty good fun and i found it delightful and randomly amusing, You do have an idea oh how to make some decent games, I have also suggested some improvment ideas below. but do try and put some of the ideas in effect as they will only make things better, But overall this was a fun game, and you seem to have it down.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see you make more of this, you ahve most of the style doen and the idea really comes across as a great game, Perhaps some advice inwich you can Utilise Ideas and fearures more better, it didnt really lack much but i have an idea or two here that may or may not help, but for the most of this, it was alright. Alright not a bad game, lots to see and do with this one, the one thing it could do with more of is some more creative items, random props and such, just some things to think about, other then that this was notbad.

enciel responds:

thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) will try my best to improve on my next submissions as well :D

[Pokémon:The first mission]

Old yet fun game

Alright you have some good ideas here and i like the concept of this whole thing, There was no real Lackluster points or anything really lacking, Infact there was not anything unnecessarily done on here, infact once again, This was a Professional meathod, and this can really thrive from your ideas, so i was pretty impressed with this. I like this for the small file size, now i also like tis because its some of the older games that really had some style to it, and this while not the greatest still shows why newgrounds was so great when it first started, but anyways good game kind of simple, could possibly use more user controll of weapons and such. so I really liked this game, it was amusing and had some differant styles of fun added to it so the extra effort does show, and I also like the creativity here it shows how the game plays and plays to the end giving some replay value, I hope to see some changes for the better and even see this get even more popular then it already is, i Enjoyed your presentation and look for more of your work soon. And once again great job on the effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have a clever looking flash entry here, you really did seem to focus on some good visuals and decently flowed along here, and there was some decent interactivity with this, so its a good game submission, This has some good Potential to do even more in various areas thruout the flash, But i must say it was a Genuinely Decent ProjectJust needs some small tweaks. This could use a few upgrades like some more variaty in weapons, more kill points on the character, including more pokemon characters to kill.