XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[build your own gundam]

Nice detail

This was a good game i like it because of all the "DETAIL" like the shadings in all the differant items. The only issue i really had with this was that the "BACKROUNDS" were too bland, you needed some color back there but something more then just the white backing, and it will greatly improve on your game, The best part of this game was all the variaty of stuff and you had lots of it, anyways hope to see more stuff from you, i really enjoyed it, and below i have suggested some ideas and tips on making things better so hope it helps, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so this was a pretty good game, had some nice detail. could use a bit more work and it should be much better after that, needed some color back there but something more then just the white backing, and it will greatly improve on your game, other then that this was ok.

[Dead Baby Super Hero Dres]

Awsome

wow this was very impressive the amount of detail and the amount of all the items, was pretty amazing, very impressed with really like the massive amount of detail and all the items, So this was actually one of the better dress up games i have had the privalige to play, So awsome job on making this so fantastic, i really had fun with it, and this is the type of game that has alot replay-value so awsome job on this, i know this one is abit old but maybe you could upgrade it with some backrounds maybe a few differant ones. anyways nice game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Making this better would only help you, so maybe some suggestions might be

[Mech Designer 5]

Fantastic

This was actaually pretty fantastic, it was very high quality and had some decent stuff to it, but it does need more robot stuff in there, more mech stuff thats what it lacked, but for the most part of it it was pretty good and showed good effort on your part so nice effort there, so as for improving i suuggest more mech stuff, more stuff that makes it standout from the rest, something for you to tryout, and some slight more animation stuff, but otherwise i like what you did here, anyways good luck on whatever you got going on here and on your next piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So for starters, could use more mech stuff, and more animated stuff aswell.

[Create a Kirby]

A decent kirby dress-up

so this was a good kirby dress up there was alot of nice things here and had alot of the elements that a good dress-up should have like animation lots of ite,s sounds and so on, you really did go all out the sound boxes should be better though, maybe bigger. The one thing that could be added to this to make it better would be some sort of backrounds, something that changes more explained below, but these are some ideas that really would make it better so give them a try anyways notbad i thought it was ok. anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try adding some sort of backround changer aswell that was about the onlything that could be added or made better, the sound boxes should be better though, maybe bigger.

[Submachine 04: the Lab]

Decent flash here

So personally this one was pretty good, have not seen some of the others but looks to be one of the better ones, You really did and excilent job on the "INSTRUCTIOND" giving good guid and detail on how things work and such thats always a blessing as some games dont even offer that so props to you, And i like the whole dark feel of things you really brought that forward and made it very dark so that was a neat little thing there, Nothing too much about this but on the ending i had fun and enjoyed it from start to end, so great job on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you presented everything pretty well for the most of it, so cant really suggest anything that you have nore put together here already, so with that great work.

[Rammer Dress-up 2(fuller)]

Its a decent dress-up

I love the whole large view screen thats something these types of games need, im not too fond of the whole click the button for next item, as the drag and drop style seems to allow the player to bemore "CREATIVE" The character was notbad kind of simple, But as with the items you did add alot of them so that kind of made up for things, Some of the backrounds, were kind of cheesy but still worked well, I still think you should change to the whole drag and drop but your game here was pretty decent and i had some fun with it, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better backrounds would be nice, and changing to the drag and drop system might work better aswell, anyways decent game.

[Build a Robot 2.1]

Very impressed here

Wow Very impressed with this one, I was not expecting this with this game but as soon as i hit play you had all this wonderfull stuff out and ready to play so that was a plus on this and each item was so differant from the other, and you gave each item some design and uniqueness too it, so awsome job and great detail all around on all the items, love the animated effort aswell, thats something alot of dress up games dont do so nice job here, anyways keep up the good work and i look forward to even more games from you. untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i thought this was a pretty solid dress up game had everything, and i was quite pleased with it all.

[Caravaneer]

A fun game here

This was a fun game, The whole RPG style is ok and cool, but the "GRAPHICS" could be smoother and better, But i will give you that it was something differant, Also some nice sound/fx on this one, The backrounds were great and gave the idea of this large world so that was kind of neat, So there was not much to say on this but i did find it to be entertaining and amusing, so anyways nice job nice effort here really good i thought, keep up the decent work and great games, i look forward to seeing and reviewing more of what you have in store for us,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
How to make this better well i would start with some better graphics and more smoother, that would be a plus and a great start to making this better.

[Coloring Book Goku]

This one was differant

Ok so i guess this was actually more like a coloring book then a dress-up, thats kinda neat and you did supply lots of differant random colors, i even liked the random color option, but i did find this in the dress-up section and i guess in a way it is, just wish there was "PROPS" and some animated types aswell, but as this style of game it was still kind of entertaining, i suppose if you are going to add anything you may want to add some music might help, but anyways nice work here, i got a kick out of it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some actual props and items would be a plus on this one,