XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Muffin Dress-Up]

This was fun

You did something differant here with having two flash segmants in one so that was pretty nifty, while i mainly am reviewing the dress-up part of stuff, the tutorial was a nifty idea and nice addition to the whole flash even saving room, so nice job there, Now as for the dress up, things were abit on the "SLOPPY" side but there was a mess laod of items and guns, The dead Strawberryclock was a nice touch hehe, anyways you should spread out all the items abit more so that theres more visuable stuff to see and all, anyways Good game here had lots of fun with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread out the items more so theres better selection, other then that it was pretty good, keep up the good work.

[Yuki Dress-Up]

Another great game

I see you have made alot of these, types of dress-ups, all pretty good, On this particular one the body seemed very small in portion to the head, now i do commend you on having lots of clothing and props that was a plus on your side, also love that not everything was just duplicate, the music choices were good too and fit well aswell, so nice effort there, so once again you have presented another great dress-ups i have no hangups about this one except what i suggested on a few of your other ones, so add some sorta backround selector, so that the backrounds change up every now and then, anyways decent game , keep up the good work,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is were i suggest a few ideas that could help to improve on this, hope it does help, and remember it can only make things better. This one was abit bland in backrounds you just had a plain one, so why not have some sorta backrounds related to the game, it would be much better then the bland palate you have now. hope those help though.

[Create-A-Rock-Star]

Very creative

Very creative with this one and the "ART" was very artistic aswell, The little "BLOCK" for censorship was kinda funny, but anyways lots of items to chose from, so the variaty of items was there, so that was a nice effort on your part, there was lots of unique stuff and really made this more unique then all the other types of dress ups that are just normal, so nice job on going beyond normal and such, i really enjoyed this game, as for improvments on the game, Some backrounds or some backround changer would be a nice option, maybe even throw in some animated items to go with your nice artwork. anyways good stuff here great game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just some ideas and tips on improving some points of the flash, so here are some suggestions, i hope they help., I will start off saying you have a good game and you have shown some good effort, but this could use some better use of backrounds, and even a backround changer, something like a scene selector. Some animated props stuff would be another nice addition.

[PooG Dress-Up (updated"]

This one was differant

So once again we have another dress-up game, This one was entertaining as much as a dress-up game can be, So this one was abit "UNIQUE" and differant and with the buttons its kins of hard to actually place stuff especially since once the button is clicked it popped everywhere, So you may want to fix that somehow, also the "BUTTONS" seemed too small maybe make them biggerm the items were ok but could use some better detail, aswell as better detail on the character, maybe even making the "CHARACTER" bigger would be a nice touch aswell, anyways decent game jusy needs some toch ups and added stuff for a better outcome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
WEll as above this could use some additions and extra stuff, such as a bigger character, bigger buttons, and even some backrounds.

[BoomStick DressUp!]

A good clock dress-up game

Well i must say this was pretty interesting, I really love the whole uniqueness of this though and great job on backrounds with the stars, and you really packed in alot of items in this one thats was a nice addition, everything was colorfull and you even had some uniue items like the "SIGN" the sign was really good idea though with the whole obey and such hehe, so with this dress up i was pretty entertained and there was alot of fun and even replay value, but anyways it was a pretty good game, if anything it it could be better with some sorta rotating backround or even scene selector, anyways nice game here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And some suggestions on making this better like above, and would be in your best interest, not to take away anything from what you have going on but it could make for a better outcome of your flash. if anything it it could be better with some sorta rotating backround or even scene selector.

[Memohuntress]

Fun game

A decent game you have here, pretty fantastic, The monstors are really good, very details and nice visual effects that was the bestpart of this whole thing, it was a good game there was lots to do and there was alot of entertaining value you to this, so generally i was pleased with the whole thing, And the music was fantastic lots of great choices and of great quality so nice effort on this and shows lots of time you put into this so nice job overall, i really liked it, keep up the awsome work, Now as for making it better, maybe more little stuff more details, and you could even throw in some sorta mini game that would be kinda nice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all good game here, the onlything i could think of to make it even better then it is, possibly have some mini games in there as a bonus or something.

[Asteroids Revenge III]

This was a nifty game

This was a pretty fun game there was alot of interaction with it and good control by the user, the graphics could use some work there, There needs to be more detail more enhanced graphics and some extra effects aswell, You already have some nice effects but some more wouldnt hurt either, The whole idea of the game is pretty neat with the astroids and such, so nice job there that was pretty nifty, The music was pretty good aswell fiy very well for the game so that was another plus , and the upgrades were great there, The best part of this was the concept of the whole astroids and such so nice effort there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There needs to be more detail more enhanced graphics and some extra effects aswell

[Effective Attack]

Pretty good if you ask me. Ok so i must admit the "MEDAL" games are fun and like that you put some on these, the medals did seem rather easy on this one though, very simple and not hard to achieve maybe you need to have a much harder way of getting the medals. or have some easy ones and harder ones, The whole idea of controlling the missle was a nice idea, and differant then most games i have played on here, so good job on that area of stuff, So this was pretty fun right from the start it was fun and got better as you went on, the graphics were ok but have room for improvment, anyways nice job hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So in an improvment sense, the only issue or issues i could see might be some improved graphics and detail, even with some of the backrounds