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[Totally Odd]

Another funmedal game

And here we have another decent entry, I was suprised actually because i was not expecting anything here, but you have suprised me with something pretty entertaining, and it was very nifty on how you presented this and how it all came together so nice effort here. Wow this game too me by suprise, i love that its all by "CLAY" thats something very differant that you have not seen on here so much have took you a good while here, very nice indeed, firstlevel was fairly easy, The walkthru is helpfull, esepcially after you get to the 2nd level and beyond, So fun game all the way thru good sound/fx nice effects and really good idea here. I just want to say congrats on the awards, not everyone gets the chance to get some but when you do its pretty awsome so congratdson the hard work and hard effort to acheive them. This was an interesting submission it was rather unique and held my interest to the highest so that i have you to thank for and a decent entry, so decent work here, now thats not to say that things could be better or improved because it can just takes more tome,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Somany ways to improve on things, and there might be a few here but before i get to that, this was a pretty interesting piece, and wouldnt mind seeing more, but anyways i may post a few ideas that may help then again they may not help but i hope they do, So one idea might be to have an Ingame walkthru would be nice instead of having to leave game and such.

[HTD: Collection 001]

Much better

Alright so you have something of interest here its appealing it has lots to see and even do, allthough this could use some more effort on some things here and there, but in the end you have presented a very welldone entry. Alright i am gonna start this one off with a rating of a "4" and hope the future ones are just as good, What i dont understand is why you had all your other submissions deleted it was a sad day when you did that because they are ok as stand alones aswell, but i do like the "CHANGES" you have made including a play music button wuch was a great addition, and with lots of medals in one game that makes me happy, the canvus could still be somewhat larger and i mean the actual drawing area, seems like you really went all out and made some good changes wich i like. I wouldnt mind seeing more "THEMES" like bears collections, angel collections and so on. And i still think that the "STEPS" should be longer they progress too much from step to step. add other types of tutorials like shading and detail, and ofcourse some coloring, The design of how you have the "MENU" set up is pretty nice i thought but you should also have the "NAMES" of each dragon on the menu page maybe as you hover over it even. So as above i have a few ideas in mind that could make it better but for the most i got a good vibe from this with lots to do here and i do look forward to more of what you may have in store for us.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright so i was impressed witha pretty good bit of this submission, there are some good efforts that could still be pushed forward with some new and basic ideas so i look forward to you making even better product with some slight improvment options. still needs a larger canvus "NOT THE SCREEN" but the actual drawing area, Also if you did like 3 or 5 multiple tuts in one submission that would be ok, you have alot now in one submission but you dont want it to get too cluttered. you can even make collections by "THEMES" like dragons, bears, wings, etc. Slow down the steps say if you have a 5 step HTD make it a 10 step one instead with a slower progression of each step, and you can even add some "COLOR" steps, maybe some shade steps and more detail steps. these are all lessins that would make the collections much better.Adding names of the dragons on the menu page would also be a nice touch.

[=Core=]

Interesting game.

I liked what you have here today, some interesting and nifty visuals and made it all kind of interesting, a little touch ups here and there, would really make it even more fun i thought, but i am really impressed with the effort you put in here. OK so i found this game to be too easy, the medal was acheived as soon as i started playing, it was just too easy so you may want to work onthis and make it harder somehow, also by adding much more medals it would also create a better "CHALLANGE" but it was an interesting and intriging game, not sure i would recremend it to friends as it was just plain too easy,but as i said it was still an interesting and somewhat entertaining game. So i just want to say, I was pretty impressed with your work here, and the effort did show, just needs some touch ups here and there, but anyways you have a good submission and i look forward to more work from you, hopfully soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested a few ideas and maybe some small advice that should help if you are willing to take it and roll with it, and i promise it should make a much better outcome, even with these small changes, it would be a plus so these are some things to think about. You should really think about adding some more and extra medals it seemed to do very well with medals but again could use some more, so just a few more would even be great, The game was too easy the medal was too easy to get give it some challange make it harder to get.